Forever Young
3-5-3 poem entry9 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
author beautiful bold pastel colors that emanate life and peace. Your poem speaks of the easy I think about life. I tell people my age who have resorted to just existing as a couch potato. Don't let life or society dictate to you how you should look, feel or be when it comes to age. I'm 67 and I get around like those who are 40s early 50. the bible says "So as a man thinketh in his heart so is he. I will forever be young at heart!
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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author beautiful bold pastel colors that emanate life and peace. Your poem speaks of the easy I think about life. I tell people my age who have resorted to just existing as a couch potato. Don't let life or society dictate to you how you should look, feel or be when it comes to age. I'm 67 and I get around like those who are 40s early 50. the bible says "So as a man thinketh in his heart so is he. I will forever be young at heart!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the
Write a 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. I like the phrase about time... very clever.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Hello my friend
A fine entry for the
Write a 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. I like the phrase about time... very clever.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great poem entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt. This is an thoughtful true poem and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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This is a great poem entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt. This is an thoughtful true poem and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Metaphorically it is rightly expressed; hands of time may be thought of this manner in effect in expression; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this and wish you good luck in the Contest. Keep writing. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Metaphorically it is rightly expressed; hands of time may be thought of this manner in effect in expression; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this and wish you good luck in the Contest. Keep writing. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from roof35
This is a lovely thought and follows the rules of the contest. The lovely illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words. This is very nicely done.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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This is a lovely thought and follows the rules of the contest. The lovely illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words. This is very nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for sharing your thoughrs.
Comment from QC Poet
Excellent concept and truely Great use of the 3-5-3 syllable allotment requirements. The Notable note included is very wise advice. Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Excellent concept and truely Great use of the 3-5-3 syllable allotment requirements. The Notable note included is very wise advice. Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for sharing your thoughrs.
Comment from zanya
Yes it's a beautiful sentiment expressed here in this short poetic format - through time love will last and grow stronger while still 'young at heart '- nice pic
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Yes it's a beautiful sentiment expressed here in this short poetic format - through time love will last and grow stronger while still 'young at heart '- nice pic
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Thank you for sharing your sentiments!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Being young at heart is the key to living a good life and being positive about the future, keep a fresh perspective is everything, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Being young at heart is the key to living a good life and being positive about the future, keep a fresh perspective is everything, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Diana Kane
So romantic. Not everyone is lucky enough to find this kind of love. You represented quite a wonderful thing and very few words. Great job! I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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So romantic. Not everyone is lucky enough to find this kind of love. You represented quite a wonderful thing and very few words. Great job! I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to share your sentiments!
