First Kiss
Something you will always remember...6 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
My what a cute poem to go with the two young ones getting ready to kiss. What made me smile was the rhyming of your poem and when there was a voice
saying,
"Hey guys...your five minutes is up for you two!"
"I'm now up and alive for another round with you!"
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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My what a cute poem to go with the two young ones getting ready to kiss. What made me smile was the rhyming of your poem and when there was a voice
saying,
"Hey guys...your five minutes is up for you two!"
"I'm now up and alive for another round with you!"
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thanks Gert, for taking the time to read one of my poems and for the very nice review.
Innocence is golden...too bad it happens only once, but that is why we write about it!
Thanks again,
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a cute account. Many of the readers will be able to identify. Our kissing was right in the circle. I wonder if some had a chance to disappear if they would even kiss. I can hear some of the conversations, "Do you really want to do this? Let's just act like we did." This will invite the reader to reminisce about their spin the bottle experiences. I'm voting for this one.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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This is a cute account. Many of the readers will be able to identify. Our kissing was right in the circle. I wonder if some had a chance to disappear if they would even kiss. I can hear some of the conversations, "Do you really want to do this? Let's just act like we did." This will invite the reader to reminisce about their spin the bottle experiences. I'm voting for this one.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Thank you Liz for reading one of my posts and for the very nice review. WE ALL should have had these experiences growing up...innocence is a one time affair.
Thanks again,
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Comment from roof35
This takes me back to my pre-teen years. I can remember "spin the bottle." This poem made me chuckle and you rhymed it, too. The illustration pairs well. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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This takes me back to my pre-teen years. I can remember "spin the bottle." This poem made me chuckle and you rhymed it, too. The illustration pairs well. Nicely done.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Thank you Judy for reading another chapter and for the very nice review. Your review made me smile...thanks for the additional detail.
Confession - I remember playing flashlight at a friend's house and I fell down the stairs when I found the babysitter. Nothing broken and we all had a good laugh.
Thanks again,
Dick
Comment from roof35
This takes me back to my pre-teen years. I can remember "spin the bottle." This poem made me chuckle and you rhymed it, too. The illustration pairs well. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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This takes me back to my pre-teen years. I can remember "spin the bottle." This poem made me chuckle and you rhymed it, too. The illustration pairs well. Nicely done.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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This is a duplicate review - I'll take it, I guess?
Comment from RodG
I never played Spin the Bottle, but enjoyed reliving this experience with the Speaker. Both he and "Billy's Sis" come to life here. Rod
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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I never played Spin the Bottle, but enjoyed reliving this experience with the Speaker. Both he and "Billy's Sis" come to life here. Rod
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Thanks Rod for reading another one of my posts and for the very nice review. Lots of memories, and I'm glad I have them. This story was indeed fiction though. LOL
Thanks again Bud,
Dick
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "I closed my eyes and hoped she would take the lead.
She leapt into my arms and I almost peed.", because I was not expecting that at all and it was pretty humorous, great way to describe those awkward teenage years!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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My favorite part was, "I closed my eyes and hoped she would take the lead.
She leapt into my arms and I almost peed.", because I was not expecting that at all and it was pretty humorous, great way to describe those awkward teenage years!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020
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Thank you Fonda for reading one of my posts and for the very nice review. We were so innocent back then, it is nice to have some memories...her name wasn't Jan. lol
Thanks again,
Dick
