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Heartfelt Poetry
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Y. M. Roger
Sometimes there is truly no understanding the where's and the why's with respect to the actions of another.... that we keep giving them chances to hurt us, that may be where we should start to ask the questions... Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2020
God will never hurt us he will direct us on a path that might hurt but in the end we'll learned it there's a good reason for it.
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January L'Angelle
Ricky, There are two poems that go together here. "Within the Touch of God" which was very nice. I liked it's love story. It was well written . Then there was, "Within the Very Presence of God" This poem was more angry and confused. It seemed to be lashing out. It too was well written with a lot of emotion. I could sense the feeling with both of these poems. One was the antithesis of the other. Well done. -January L.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2020
I like the feel sometimes as it's cycling and I wonder when it does arrive what's going to be in store for me on how to present it.
it's almost like after 2 and 1/2 years at cursing Christ and wanting to die and cursing him cuz I didn't all of a sudden he put something crazy in my head that I can't get out?
Thanks,
Ricky
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