Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for your reminder to trust love and friendship even after disappointments. I admired your rhymed couplets in these quatrains and your "web" metaphor. Be safe and well- Joan

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Dawn, This is a very interesting poem you have penned my friend. You used very good heart felt words. Some lovely music to go with your poem. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020

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Problems with my cursor so cutting and pasting and can't stay, but thank you!

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You speak a lot of words of wisdom in this poem. I'm sure much of it is learned through life's experiences. I enjoyed reading. The rhyming scheme helped make for a musical flow.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020

Comment from CHANYA MASHENGU

Excellent

I liked the use of words to spring out the process of healing and finally staying put.
I liked the choice of image that quotes scripture that God loves us at our darkest.
And that when we let go we finally heal

Great work

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020

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Problems with my cursor so cutting and pasting and can't stay, but thank you!

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

These words sound like lyrics to a song, Dawn. You just need what I think they call a hook--repeated lines. I think yours is
Give in. Rise again. . . .
I like your heartfelt message and your words.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020