Wild Tim and the Widder Lady
A wild and wooly cowboy poem.26 total reviews
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
Wow...This is really good...love the cowboy language.
The deeper meaning of the poetry really shines out."Even the wilds can be tamed by love".Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Wow...This is really good...love the cowboy language.
The deeper meaning of the poetry really shines out."Even the wilds can be tamed by love".Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you,for the nice review and stars.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Love it, love it!! ;) You should've entered this one in the Story in a Poem contest, Willie -- a wonderful love story out of the Western Fairy Tale Book! ;) :) Thanx for sharing!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Love it, love it!! ;) You should've entered this one in the Story in a Poem contest, Willie -- a wonderful love story out of the Western Fairy Tale Book! ;) :) Thanx for sharing!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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As always, Yvette, thank you for the nice review and stars.
Comment from January L'Angelle
I absolutely LOVE cowboy poems!! This is just about one of the best I've heard. It is a wonderful love story and really melts your heart, Tim sounds like a real hoot. Well penned. Sixer for sure! -January L.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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I absolutely LOVE cowboy poems!! This is just about one of the best I've heard. It is a wonderful love story and really melts your heart, Tim sounds like a real hoot. Well penned. Sixer for sure! -January L.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you, January, cowboy poetry is my favorite genre. I very much
appreciate your kind words and wonderful six stars.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Wild Tim and the Widder Lady", is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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"Wild Tim and the Widder Lady", is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you, Duchess, for your review and stars and also the compliment.
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Willie P.Smith,
you're more than welcome.
God bless, take care and stay free,
the Duchess
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Creative spelling and dialect going on here for a cowboy poem. I smiled at the idea of the new underwear being the deal-breaker/deal-maker, with the idea Tim wants to talk 'a lot' compared to before. Nice conclusion.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Creative spelling and dialect going on here for a cowboy poem. I smiled at the idea of the new underwear being the deal-breaker/deal-maker, with the idea Tim wants to talk 'a lot' compared to before. Nice conclusion.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you, Crystie, for your review and stars. Wild Tim and the Widder appreciate it.
Comment from Gail Denham
Great - I do love cowboy poetry and write some of it too. It's so fun to see what stories we can come up with - actually there are some similar stories in most cowboy poetry. We almost got to go to the Elko Cowboy poetry show one year - but didn't work out. Perhaps another year.
good job.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Great - I do love cowboy poetry and write some of it too. It's so fun to see what stories we can come up with - actually there are some similar stories in most cowboy poetry. We almost got to go to the Elko Cowboy poetry show one year - but didn't work out. Perhaps another year.
good job.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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I got invited to the Prescott, AZ. cowboy poet meeting a few years ago and got to read, aloud, a couple of my cowboy poems. Everyone seemed to enjoy them. one of them I'm posting tonight, "The red bandana" So glad you Enjoyed.
Comment from patcelaw
We never know what a lady may see in a man who is a bit on the wild side. But when she captures his heart we are amazed at the changes she can bring about in him. This was a fun read.
Patricia
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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We never know what a lady may see in a man who is a bit on the wild side. But when she captures his heart we are amazed at the changes she can bring about in him. This was a fun read.
Patricia
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you, Patricia, for your review and stars.
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Your cowboy poetry was a refreshing take on Fanstory. Your graphics and cowboy slang was also a plus in my book.
The Rhymes were good, but the rhythm was sometimes off-beat making the read a bit off-kilter.
All in all, it was a very good story and a great read.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Your cowboy poetry was a refreshing take on Fanstory. Your graphics and cowboy slang was also a plus in my book.
The Rhymes were good, but the rhythm was sometimes off-beat making the read a bit off-kilter.
All in all, it was a very good story and a great read.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you, for the review and stars.
Comment from smileycloud
I was very disappointed when I got to the end....THERE WEREN'T NO MORE
I could have gone on reading your poem right through to "movie length"
I could have been in a cinema watching the old cowboy movies
love the language and the short decisive lines
to the point but told a powerful lot of a story
the characterization is brilliant...I feel like I know Tim and Lilly
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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I was very disappointed when I got to the end....THERE WEREN'T NO MORE
I could have gone on reading your poem right through to "movie length"
I could have been in a cinema watching the old cowboy movies
love the language and the short decisive lines
to the point but told a powerful lot of a story
the characterization is brilliant...I feel like I know Tim and Lilly
have a smiley day
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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So glad you liked the poem. Wild Tim and the Widder sure appreciates the review and shiny six stars
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::):)
Comment from Ogden
I'm not right sure woolly Tim was a cowboy,
because I never heard no real cowboy talk like that. And he's a bit too long in the tooth, too. He's maybe ok for an extra, I reckon.
Buffalo Ogden
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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I'm not right sure woolly Tim was a cowboy,
because I never heard no real cowboy talk like that. And he's a bit too long in the tooth, too. He's maybe ok for an extra, I reckon.
Buffalo Ogden
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thanks, Buffalo, Wild Tim and the Widder appreciate the review and stars.
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I'm glad you see it that way, cuz I wuz jest aspoofin'
