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Comment from palmart
Perfect poem, full of wisdom and full of advices, as well, for a happy life. Nice (apple) green framework for this poem, as "green" means "hope"...
Proverb included in the artwork is full of wise words. Congratulations for the well-deserved recognitions!!
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Perfect poem, full of wisdom and full of advices, as well, for a happy life. Nice (apple) green framework for this poem, as "green" means "hope"...
Proverb included in the artwork is full of wise words. Congratulations for the well-deserved recognitions!!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
Comment from wilbs
I thank you for being a poet, writer and a teacher. I learned new things, inspired by your writing, and moved to inspiring to others, and all of that happened by just reading one poem, I would like to call that as in breathing, the right way
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I thank you for being a poet, writer and a teacher. I learned new things, inspired by your writing, and moved to inspiring to others, and all of that happened by just reading one poem, I would like to call that as in breathing, the right way
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It is true, again, that only living for God is the smart thing to do. Wisdom is given only through God. Our eternal life depends on our faith in God. Again, thank you for sharing.
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It is true, again, that only living for God is the smart thing to do. Wisdom is given only through God. Our eternal life depends on our faith in God. Again, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
Comment from elchupakabra
We could all do to be a little wiser in life. I think you did a good job yet again packing a lot into a little - you should consider a career as a mover :P Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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We could all do to be a little wiser in life. I think you did a good job yet again packing a lot into a little - you should consider a career as a mover :P Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
Comment from amada
Great poem that somehow it reminded me of my grandmother's lines. Be clean in body and spirit, she used to say.. Your lies somehow fids a niche in my heart; just trying to live a quiet life, and honor the Lord as the years go along.
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Great poem that somehow it reminded me of my grandmother's lines. Be clean in body and spirit, she used to say.. Your lies somehow fids a niche in my heart; just trying to live a quiet life, and honor the Lord as the years go along.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written six star poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. My favorite part was where you said Unwise living is always challenged, God gifts man life for He wishes man may go for making and maintaining a natural, moral, wise and meaningful living and experience a living that God expects from man
May God bless you my friend! Teri
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This is a very well written six star poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. My favorite part was where you said Unwise living is always challenged, God gifts man life for He wishes man may go for making and maintaining a natural, moral, wise and meaningful living and experience a living that God expects from man
May God bless you my friend! Teri
Comment Written 31-May-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
These are pearls of wisdom. God brought us to this earth in the hope that we follow the righteous way of living as ordained by Him. But alas! We have failed him. Hopefully, we will learn a lesson and do a course correction. Thanks for sharing!
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These are pearls of wisdom. God brought us to this earth in the hope that we follow the righteous way of living as ordained by Him. But alas! We have failed him. Hopefully, we will learn a lesson and do a course correction. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 31-May-2021
Comment from Wendy G
That is a simple but wise outlook on life and living, expressed in your own style and fashion. I like the thoughts expressed in your well-chosen image also. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with the readers.
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That is a simple but wise outlook on life and living, expressed in your own style and fashion. I like the thoughts expressed in your well-chosen image also. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with the readers.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Repetition of BE works to powerful effect--I am not familiar with the fine points of tanka--I trust you are--given you are a prolific poet--I just read two others! Spot on pic for the theme.
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Repetition of BE works to powerful effect--I am not familiar with the fine points of tanka--I trust you are--given you are a prolific poet--I just read two others! Spot on pic for the theme.
Comment Written 30-May-2021
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Yes, we should all strive to be good, moral, and wise. These traits can be accomplished--and maintained on and on--only with the Lord's help, for man's wisdom is--foolishness! Your poem vividly expresses a message about thee traits.
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Yes, we should all strive to be good, moral, and wise. These traits can be accomplished--and maintained on and on--only with the Lord's help, for man's wisdom is--foolishness! Your poem vividly expresses a message about thee traits.
Comment Written 30-May-2021
