Mom's Magic Vision
Guess what I just discovered?40 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This loop poem, Mom's Magic Vision, follows the formatting and sees also the truth of others willful blindness of that which requires picking up. Funny.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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This loop poem, Mom's Magic Vision, follows the formatting and sees also the truth of others willful blindness of that which requires picking up. Funny.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thanx, Bill! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the contest Yvette. This was colorful and truly amazing, because of the secret that only Moms can see. Nice rhyme noted. I loved the picture you chose for a couple of reasons. First the owl does see all, even those secret things and secondly the owl is wise and knowledgeable. Great job, be well be safe.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Good luck in the contest Yvette. This was colorful and truly amazing, because of the secret that only Moms can see. Nice rhyme noted. I loved the picture you chose for a couple of reasons. First the owl does see all, even those secret things and secondly the owl is wise and knowledgeable. Great job, be well be safe.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this one, Alie -- loops are a pain and it's only once in a while that I have the patience to tackle them! ;) You have a wonderful rest of the week over there and enjoy the Spring! :) Yvette
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You are so welcome Yvette, it is getting warm here, we are in the high 80s now and are to see some triple digits late next week. They keep talking about the monsoon season but yet from what I have learned rarely see rain. Who knows, maybe the heat will get rid of the virus. (>:
Comment from Gypsymooncat
Six stars grace this review because this is a fantastic loop poem. Six stars because what you say is so true: mothers do notice things out of place. Six stars because I totally love the effort you put into the presentation - it's a feast for eye and mind alike. Six stars because it deserves 10, but dem's the breaks...and the limits, sadly.
Ladies and gentleman - WE HAVE A WINNER! I'm not wishing you luck Yvette; I'm congratulating you, because this is a winner whether it sports the badge or not. But I reckon it'll get the badge...
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Six stars grace this review because this is a fantastic loop poem. Six stars because what you say is so true: mothers do notice things out of place. Six stars because I totally love the effort you put into the presentation - it's a feast for eye and mind alike. Six stars because it deserves 10, but dem's the breaks...and the limits, sadly.
Ladies and gentleman - WE HAVE A WINNER! I'm not wishing you luck Yvette; I'm congratulating you, because this is a winner whether it sports the badge or not. But I reckon it'll get the badge...
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Wow, Gypsy!! That has to be the most awesome review I've ever received -- you just made not only my night but my entire week, my lady!! THANK YOU for your wonderful comments and for the stars that are shining through all this gloomy rain down here!! You know, loops are usually my nemesis and I've skipped more contests than I've entered simply because I get waaaaay too annoyed with them!! :) Somehow, this one just 'worked' the other night... maybe I was so tired that it 'just happened' without my thinking too hard about it!! ;) Whatever the case, you've certainly put a smile on my face tonight, my lady! Take care out there and have a great upcoming week!! ;) Yvette
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Trust me, the pleasure was all mine Yvette! I think you nailed it, and hope the Committee agrees. You have a wunnerful week ahead yourself xoxoxo
Comment from bob cullen
This is so true. Mum's have great vision when something's lost but such poor vision when looking at the behaviour of their own children. Well some Mum's are blinded to the faults of their own. This poetry format is so clever. Last word on each lines becomes the first word on the next. It must take a lot of time to get it right. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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This is so true. Mum's have great vision when something's lost but such poor vision when looking at the behaviour of their own children. Well some Mum's are blinded to the faults of their own. This poetry format is so clever. Last word on each lines becomes the first word on the next. It must take a lot of time to get it right. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, bob, for your wonderful review... loops are my nemesis but every now and again I can make it work (I'm thinking it's a patience thing... and I certainly don't have a lot of those on a regular basis!). :) Take care and have a wonderful week, sir!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gail Denham
Nicely done - the loop form - seamless I thought since I didn't notice the repetition until almost the end. I loved the owl - I ahve several stuffed ones sitting around me as I type. And your magic vision - I do wonder if we all see things that others do not?
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Nicely done - the loop form - seamless I thought since I didn't notice the repetition until almost the end. I loved the owl - I ahve several stuffed ones sitting around me as I type. And your magic vision - I do wonder if we all see things that others do not?
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, Gail! ;) So good to hear there's another 'owl person' out there - I've got stuffed ones and a big ol' calendar one looking at me at all times!! ;) Of course, I couldn't pass up the owl when I went looking for a pic - he's so 'bright and bold' ... just the way I like things!! ;) Take care and have a wonderful week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Yvette, this is excellent - a perfect Loop. It will take some beating I think. Gorgeous display, both in picture and font. Gorgeous and colourful throughout. A lovely poem - reads perfectly, Loop or otherwise. Good Luck - stay safe, love Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Hello Yvette, this is excellent - a perfect Loop. It will take some beating I think. Gorgeous display, both in picture and font. Gorgeous and colourful throughout. A lovely poem - reads perfectly, Loop or otherwise. Good Luck - stay safe, love Dorothy xx
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, Dorothy, for your wonderful review... loops are my nemesis but every now and again I can make it work (I'm thinking it's a patience thing... and I certainly don't have a lot of those on a regular basis!). :) Take care this week, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from robyn corum
V,
Okay, loved the poem. So tongue-in-cheek and dead-on. Ha. I am not sure how this works.
It is kinda like when I call my eldest grand girl and she says, 'huh?' and then about five voices in the room chorus, 'Ma'am' to remind her.
One of my kids said, 'we say that every time but she's not getting it.'
I said, 'oh, yeah. We did the same thing with you guys and now look what is happening.' There IS hope.
The question is -- will we live to see it?
--sigh--
Hehehe
A super loop. (Like a rollercoaster, get it?)
I have no doubt you will be at the top where you belong. Good luck!!
Btw, no image for me.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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V,
Okay, loved the poem. So tongue-in-cheek and dead-on. Ha. I am not sure how this works.
It is kinda like when I call my eldest grand girl and she says, 'huh?' and then about five voices in the room chorus, 'Ma'am' to remind her.
One of my kids said, 'we say that every time but she's not getting it.'
I said, 'oh, yeah. We did the same thing with you guys and now look what is happening.' There IS hope.
The question is -- will we live to see it?
--sigh--
Hehehe
A super loop. (Like a rollercoaster, get it?)
I have no doubt you will be at the top where you belong. Good luck!!
Btw, no image for me.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Awww... you didn't get to see my bright bold owl - got to be your browser or something because many others have commented on the owl!! ;) Sorry you missed him, but I'm glad you enjoyed, my lady! ;) I'm just gonna be happy to live to see a marriage...lol!! ;) :) Take care this week and keep on smiling out there!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette. Around here, I am the one with the magic eyes. In fact, I do it to the chagrin of the wife. I notice everything that is somewhere it shouldn't be. She finds that very annoying. :))))) Now that I have lots of time, I'm getting better at it. :))))) Its a well done loop poem. Good luck in the contest.
I can identify with you poem so well.
Take care of yourself. Z (*_*)
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Hello Yvette. Around here, I am the one with the magic eyes. In fact, I do it to the chagrin of the wife. I notice everything that is somewhere it shouldn't be. She finds that very annoying. :))))) Now that I have lots of time, I'm getting better at it. :))))) Its a well done loop poem. Good luck in the contest.
I can identify with you poem so well.
Take care of yourself. Z (*_*)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Yeah... my husband and you are from different planets, Z. :) :) You know, I got used to 'nobody' around except the husband that leaves things, but now... lol! :) :) Thanx so much for your review - have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from kahpot
God bless our Moms, as not only material things but emotions they see and know when some thing is not right, a wonderful loop poem and best wishes for your contest, stay well and stay safe****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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God bless our Moms, as not only material things but emotions they see and know when some thing is not right, a wonderful loop poem and best wishes for your contest, stay well and stay safe****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much for your review on this one -- you take care as well!! ;) :)
Comment from royowen
This is a brilliant entry in this contest Yvette, these are actually quite, ive never been happy with my attempts at them, the repeats in other people's poems appeared to me to be forced, but not so yours, so well done Yvette, good luck, blessings, Roy
Suggestion . S3 line 2 : "it simply awes, a burden too"
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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This is a brilliant entry in this contest Yvette, these are actually quite, ive never been happy with my attempts at them, the repeats in other people's poems appeared to me to be forced, but not so yours, so well done Yvette, good luck, blessings, Roy
Suggestion . S3 line 2 : "it simply awes, a burden too"
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much for the review and for the suggestion, Roy, I promise to take a look at that! I was just happy to complete a loop poem without frustration and such -- many's the time I've actually just 'quit' on a loop because they're so annoying! :) Sending you wishes for a wonderful week across the world, sir! :) Yvette
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Well done
