Safety
The story of an aggrieved heart3 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Writer very well said about the matters of the heart. Al Green singer song How Can You Mend a Broken Heart do you remember that? When you take something to Heart it affects the whole body and when the heart is aching the body is aching and I've heard of people dying from a broken heart this was a very good sentimental piece I loved it. It was very well written within the guidelines and made a beautiful work of art
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Writer very well said about the matters of the heart. Al Green singer song How Can You Mend a Broken Heart do you remember that? When you take something to Heart it affects the whole body and when the heart is aching the body is aching and I've heard of people dying from a broken heart this was a very good sentimental piece I loved it. It was very well written within the guidelines and made a beautiful work of art
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank You!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A broken heart often takes a while to mend and then it can become a recluse to protect itself, but somehow we seem to love again and again, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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A broken heart often takes a while to mend and then it can become a recluse to protect itself, but somehow we seem to love again and again, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thanks Dolly!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Etheree writing prompt.
This well written verse has a clear message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Etheree writing prompt.
This well written verse has a clear message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Thank You!
