The Beginning of the End
A Free verse poem...15 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Yep, I'm behind. Aw, this is so good, Di. Wow! Impacting to the soul. I'm contually amazed at how talented you are. A sad souldful song crowns your fine work. Superb!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxoxo
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Yep, I'm behind. Aw, this is so good, Di. Wow! Impacting to the soul. I'm contually amazed at how talented you are. A sad souldful song crowns your fine work. Superb!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxoxo
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thanks my lady! You?re the best! I couldn?t pass up this picture! I mean, wow, the umbrella too! I?ve met some jerks, but this guy takes the cake! LoL! xoxoxo
Comment from judiverse
Lovely artwork. I like all that green. Left standing in the rain, that's pretty bad. And to take her umbrella on top of it was just too much. He certainly revealed his true self, and the gal wises up. It's so true that something like that is enough to make you give up on the guy. Excellent free verse, as you capture a moment in time with the atmosphere of the rainy day. judi
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Lovely artwork. I like all that green. Left standing in the rain, that's pretty bad. And to take her umbrella on top of it was just too much. He certainly revealed his true self, and the gal wises up. It's so true that something like that is enough to make you give up on the guy. Excellent free verse, as you capture a moment in time with the atmosphere of the rainy day. judi
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much! I mean how rude! Leave me but don?t take the umbrella too! Wow! Haha! Appreciate your previous feedback! xoxo
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You're very welcome. I am also available to offer advice for a small fee. judi
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Thank you :)
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You're welcome. My rates are very affordable! judi
Comment from BeasPeas
This is an interesting piece. Some will hold onto the belief of love even when deep down they know they're not valued. One day an event occurs that convinces us love wasn't what we thought. This poem is well written and illustrated. Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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This is an interesting piece. Some will hold onto the belief of love even when deep down they know they're not valued. One day an event occurs that convinces us love wasn't what we thought. This poem is well written and illustrated. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Marilyn! Appreciate your feedback and stars! xoxo
Comment from Larry5000
Forgot about this song, have not heard it in a long time. But very fitting for the poem you wrote. Great job for sure. I think the reason I do not put out more work on a consistent basis is because I am more hooked on straight rhyme with usually 3 to 5 stanzas 4 lines each. Maybe I should try some of how you wrote this poem. Anyway keep it up always a pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Forgot about this song, have not heard it in a long time. But very fitting for the poem you wrote. Great job for sure. I think the reason I do not put out more work on a consistent basis is because I am more hooked on straight rhyme with usually 3 to 5 stanzas 4 lines each. Maybe I should try some of how you wrote this poem. Anyway keep it up always a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you! I like to pack as much as I can into the least amount of words. Now some can be quite short, but a couple of stanzas is good I think. It depends really on what?s being shared. The more story to a poem, the longer it will be. xoxo
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Well you certainly do pack a good amount. :-)
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LoL!! xoxo
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
I really like your poem because you used a lot of good words, and you said a lot in 4 stanzas. And your picture matches perfectly with your poem. I don't know how you find a picture to match your poem. I always have trouble with that.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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I really like your poem because you used a lot of good words, and you said a lot in 4 stanzas. And your picture matches perfectly with your poem. I don't know how you find a picture to match your poem. I always have trouble with that.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you honey! I usually go to Pinterest and search phrases like ?man and woman in rain? or anything that relates to my poem. This one, though, I found while searching for a different poem and wrote to interpret it. Appreciate you liked! xoxo
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You're welcome! xoxo
Comment from Lu Saluna
The poem and image go perfectly together. Did the image give inspiration for the poem? It is a very sad poem. Someone got their heart broken in the cruelest of ways. It is well written and flows nicely but it is heartbreaking.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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The poem and image go perfectly together. Did the image give inspiration for the poem? It is a very sad poem. Someone got their heart broken in the cruelest of ways. It is well written and flows nicely but it is heartbreaking.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you, and yes, actually this is one of the few times a picture inspired the poem! Appreciate your feedback! xoxo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about the selfish and cruel lover who not onot take away your umbrella and leave you standing in the rain, he also take your heart and step on it in the mud.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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A very well-written free verse poem about the selfish and cruel lover who not onot take away your umbrella and leave you standing in the rain, he also take your heart and step on it in the mud.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Yeah! The bum! Haha! Thanks for checking this out!! Appreciate! xoxo
Comment from Drew Delaney
It's so amazing how some people can lie and cheat and not even show any kind of guilt or shame for the trust they have damaged. And yet turn on that very person time and again.
Drew xx
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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It's so amazing how some people can lie and cheat and not even show any kind of guilt or shame for the trust they have damaged. And yet turn on that very person time and again.
Drew xx
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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It?s so true! Not even a hint of wrong doing! That?s why I thought this picture expressed that perfectly, the big jerk! Haha!! xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The man in the poem is not a nice man. Anyone that takes a umbrella from a woman and lets her get wet is very thoughtless. Its like the quote, when it rain it pours.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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The man in the poem is not a nice man. Anyone that takes a umbrella from a woman and lets her get wet is very thoughtless. Its like the quote, when it rain it pours.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Yeah, the jerk! And he looks like he?s hit a smirk in his face too! Haha! Thanks fir enjoying! xoxo
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
You captured my attention when I first saw the photo I said dam, what got him so upset he walked away like that no matter what it was a gentleman doesn't leave a lady in the rain.
She is better off without him. Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
You captured my attention when I first saw the photo I said dam, what got him so upset he walked away like that no matter what it was a gentleman doesn't leave a lady in the rain.
She is better off without him. Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Oh yeah, it looks like he?s even got a smile on his face! Haha! Thanks for reading! xoxo
