Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "earth to family"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
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Comment from Eve Vasa
You create mystery within this six word poem and that's hard to do, so well done. It is funny how people scapegoat other people, usually for their own shortcomings. And you are right, they should feel their own shame before they try shaming-out someone else.
Nice job with this and best of luck in the competition, Eve.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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You create mystery within this six word poem and that's hard to do, so well done. It is funny how people scapegoat other people, usually for their own shortcomings. And you are right, they should feel their own shame before they try shaming-out someone else.
Nice job with this and best of luck in the competition, Eve.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you a million!
Comment from Ricky1024
"read all about it!"
Is a 6 Word Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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"read all about it!"
Is a 6 Word Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much!
