Dawn's Favorite Poems, Vol. 4
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "He Is Constant"eclectic poetry favorites from 2017 & 2018
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a beautifully personal testimony, Dawn, that speaks vividly to the heart of someone that has 'been there' but refusing to 'go down'.... wonderful faith, my friend! ;) Thanx for sharing your melodic offering! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Such a beautifully personal testimony, Dawn, that speaks vividly to the heart of someone that has 'been there' but refusing to 'go down'.... wonderful faith, my friend! ;) Thanx for sharing your melodic offering! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 02-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much, Yvette. :)
Comment from Drew Delaney
Beautifully written! Life has a way of allowing us to earn every grey hair on our heads.
Happy Birthday, dear writing friend. You are in good hands! Bless you!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Beautifully written! Life has a way of allowing us to earn every grey hair on our heads.
Happy Birthday, dear writing friend. You are in good hands! Bless you!
Drew xx
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much. :)
Comment from Joan E.
First, happy birthday--you have some catching up to do, since I am seventy-six! Thank you for sharing your spiritual poem of thanks for a special Friend, as you contemplate your years. I admired your rhymed couplets and symbolic artwork. Many happy returns- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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First, happy birthday--you have some catching up to do, since I am seventy-six! Thank you for sharing your spiritual poem of thanks for a special Friend, as you contemplate your years. I admired your rhymed couplets and symbolic artwork. Many happy returns- Joan
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much. :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Well, happy birthday. I guess today is the day. I celebrated 78 on the 20th. A good time, and looking forward to another good year. Your poem reflects the contentment we have with God in our lives. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Well, happy birthday. I guess today is the day. I celebrated 78 on the 20th. A good time, and looking forward to another good year. Your poem reflects the contentment we have with God in our lives. Marilyn
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much. :)
Comment from Ulla
Hi Dawn, you and I are at the same age. I will be sixty-eight in late May. I'm so happy for you that you have your deep faith. That is good. I must say that I believe in man as a good friend. At least, I'm surrounded by family and good friends. I loved your poem. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Hi Dawn, you and I are at the same age. I will be sixty-eight in late May. I'm so happy for you that you have your deep faith. That is good. I must say that I believe in man as a good friend. At least, I'm surrounded by family and good friends. I loved your poem. Ulla xx
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much. :)
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent ... worthy of another six stars ... all of them in fact. It is full of true value grace and wisdom reaching far beyond the atmosphere of scented bunnies and feathered favourites. It calls on the ear to listen hard and its lesson prevails with the truth of reality and both endearment and wisdom ... it is precious.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Excellent ... worthy of another six stars ... all of them in fact. It is full of true value grace and wisdom reaching far beyond the atmosphere of scented bunnies and feathered favourites. It calls on the ear to listen hard and its lesson prevails with the truth of reality and both endearment and wisdom ... it is precious.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much. :)
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
Wow! Very well done, Dawn. I love that second verse.
The heart that this world breaks in two, the soul that screams, "Not I!" He lends me strength when I have none--He urges me to try. I rise and rise again because I have that special friend, and He's the one I count on now, and will until the end.
Yes! Put it all in His hands and He will see you through. Well done Dear. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Wow! Very well done, Dawn. I love that second verse.
The heart that this world breaks in two, the soul that screams, "Not I!" He lends me strength when I have none--He urges me to try. I rise and rise again because I have that special friend, and He's the one I count on now, and will until the end.
Yes! Put it all in His hands and He will see you through. Well done Dear. Nancy:)
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Nancy. :))
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
HAPPY BIRTHDAY, DAWN!! I tried to put one on your Facebook, but you didn't have a timeline to write on. Have a lovely day, my friend.
Your poem is sad, yet full of love for He who is always there for you. Some people can be evil, and no amount forgiveness you give won't change them. Stay true to who you are, Dawn, a lovely, sweet lady, with a big heart. Those who have tried to break you, they are the losers. You know you can't go wrong when you have God in your heart and Jesus by your side. Sending a humongous Birthday hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY, DAWN!! I tried to put one on your Facebook, but you didn't have a timeline to write on. Have a lovely day, my friend.
Your poem is sad, yet full of love for He who is always there for you. Some people can be evil, and no amount forgiveness you give won't change them. Stay true to who you are, Dawn, a lovely, sweet lady, with a big heart. Those who have tried to break you, they are the losers. You know you can't go wrong when you have God in your heart and Jesus by your side. Sending a humongous Birthday hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Ah, Sandra, you are so kind -- I'm fine, and I guess there will always be those kinds of people in pretty much every walk of life.
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late reply. xxoo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the best friend we find in Him and He never change towards us when we feel a change it is we who change towards Him.
Happy Birthday and may you by have many more.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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A very well-written poem about the best friend we find in Him and He never change towards us when we feel a change it is we who change towards Him.
Happy Birthday and may you by have many more.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Ricky1024
"He is Constant"
Well crafted as if a Message from above...
With many factors from God's will and Love to Your Faith...
"He is Constant"
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Hung on a Rosewood Cross on Calvary that sad, sad, day...
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Crucified!
Crown of Thorns!
Adorned His Head!
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Little Lord Jesus laid down his Sweet head ..
Bethlehem...
Manger...
Three Wise Men from Afar but...
Below He Bleeds the ground...
Crimson Red...
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This read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Rich in Theme and Imagery...
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and I While Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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"He is Constant"
Well crafted as if a Message from above...
With many factors from God's will and Love to Your Faith...
"He is Constant"
...
Hung on a Rosewood Cross on Calvary that sad, sad, day...
...
Crucified!
Crown of Thorns!
Adorned His Head!
...
Little Lord Jesus laid down his Sweet head ..
Bethlehem...
Manger...
Three Wise Men from Afar but...
Below He Bleeds the ground...
Crimson Red...
...
This read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Rich in Theme and Imagery...
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and I While Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
