Shepherd
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Your Rod and Your Staff"poems inspired by Psalm 23
29 total reviews
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Writing about Jesus is always inspiring and gives me strength. These descriptions are everything that tells of Jesus. Smooth and beautiful and tender write.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Writing about Jesus is always inspiring and gives me strength. These descriptions are everything that tells of Jesus. Smooth and beautiful and tender write.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the encouraging comments. It is always good to hear from you.
Comment from Kingsrookviii
Wow, I am unfamiliar with this format, but I love the spiritual flow of this poem. In my present frame of time, it calls to me at a perfect time in a manner than allows me to give over my burdens to Jesus. I usually am a fixer of problems, myself and don't seek through proper prayer, His help although he is there, always. I'm a bit weary and this one hit a spot, so that along with our changing weather, these taxing changes of late are less of a burden that I shall keep to myself and give unto Christ His will be done, not mine. Maybe the ride will get better. Very spiritual in a direct way that is uncomplicated and righteous. Great job. Bruce.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Wow, I am unfamiliar with this format, but I love the spiritual flow of this poem. In my present frame of time, it calls to me at a perfect time in a manner than allows me to give over my burdens to Jesus. I usually am a fixer of problems, myself and don't seek through proper prayer, His help although he is there, always. I'm a bit weary and this one hit a spot, so that along with our changing weather, these taxing changes of late are less of a burden that I shall keep to myself and give unto Christ His will be done, not mine. Maybe the ride will get better. Very spiritual in a direct way that is uncomplicated and righteous. Great job. Bruce.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Hi Bruce,
I am sorry for the delay in responding. I went away for a few days and didn't have anything active on the site. How delightful to return to your review. I don't mean just the six stars--which ar very much appreciated--but even more your comments. It is so nice to know that this one was appreciated and meant something to you at this time. God bless.
Debi
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello
I like the format you used, which I never saw until now
Is very good and reminds me of what it tells us what Jesus said that He is the good and I am Shepard your rod and your staff; from Psalm 23.
Gert
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Hello
I like the format you used, which I never saw until now
Is very good and reminds me of what it tells us what Jesus said that He is the good and I am Shepard your rod and your staff; from Psalm 23.
Gert
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Gert. You have a great eye. I have a book of poetry on the site called Shepherd. I am taking words and phrases from Psalm 23 for each poem. I am trying to use a different poetry from for each poem. It took a while to find something that fit "thy rod and they staff" and I finally found the Tableau form with its five beats per line. I'll be moving this over to the book later today.
Thank you for the great review. I think your reviewed just after it expired so you only got two cent. I appreciate you being so generous with your time and comments.
Debi
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You are so welcome Debi.
Gert
Comment from Alchera
Beautifully penned throughout its doubled stanzaic beat linedTableau form structure and its religious narrative storylined content. Well don and a good job. I like it.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Beautifully penned throughout its doubled stanzaic beat linedTableau form structure and its religious narrative storylined content. Well don and a good job. I like it.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate you stopping by to read and review.
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You will always be in my heart and believe me I couldn't give You a nomination this month because I had run out of them. Blessings from Italy
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Enjoy Italy. I know I did when I lived there.
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Wow, So you speak Italian, too! So you could read my Italian poems,too?
Thank you for your reviewing and help. Blessings Tony
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You are always welcomed! Tony
Comment from dmt1967
This poem is most powerful especially the line at the end, 'come and follow me.' That line brings the poem together, in my opinion. Thank you for sharing and take care.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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This poem is most powerful especially the line at the end, 'come and follow me.' That line brings the poem together, in my opinion. Thank you for sharing and take care.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the great review and kind comments. I appreciate you sharing what you liked.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello W. J. I like your poem and content. You touch on several points of faith that all believers do, or at least should, recognize.
The final phrase compels all to come and follow Christ . Well done. Robert
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Hello W. J. I like your poem and content. You touch on several points of faith that all believers do, or at least should, recognize.
The final phrase compels all to come and follow Christ . Well done. Robert
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Hi Robert,
Thank you for great analysis of the theme. I appreciate you stopping by to read and offer a review.
Debi
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sugarray77
Great job on this faith-filled modified Tableau.. we use the word modified here on FS when we play with a form (wink). LOL. Great job on this one.
Melissa
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Great job on this faith-filled modified Tableau.. we use the word modified here on FS when we play with a form (wink). LOL. Great job on this one.
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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I appreciate you stopping by to read and review. Have a wonderful evening.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. You've described many of the attributes of Christ beautifully in this. I really enjoyed this inspirational and well written work. Great job and well done!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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I like this. You've described many of the attributes of Christ beautifully in this. I really enjoyed this inspirational and well written work. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the encouraging comments. I appreciate you stopping by to read and review my work.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned in the borrowed Tableau form about our Savior. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings,Teri
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned in the borrowed Tableau form about our Savior. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings,Teri
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Terry. I appreciate the encouraging comments about the words and imagery.
I guess I should say I borrowed the format. I didn't put the word tableau in the title as required so it isn't a true tableau form.
Comment from Malerie
"Reaching outstretched arms...come follow me." So powerful and the artwork you selected make your words just leap out, so real, heartfelt. Thanks for sharing this inspiring poem.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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"Reaching outstretched arms...come follow me." So powerful and the artwork you selected make your words just leap out, so real, heartfelt. Thanks for sharing this inspiring poem.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you for such kind comments and encouragement. I appreciate you stopping by to read and review.
