Christmas Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "2019 The Brightest Light"Collection of Christmas Poetry
7 total reviews
Comment from irishauthorme
Sent you a text review on this poem but also can see a hidden message here, and that is; "Let's put Christ back in Christmas!"
So many forget that the reason for the season is to celebrate the birth of Jesus.
No one has left such a legacy and given us more simple principles on how to live a just life following the ten commandments.
Jesus had no property, no wardrobe beyond his simple garments, and no wealth, and yet we now found a successful Christmas on the amount of money spent by consumers.
The "Brightest Light" is indeed the "Right Light," emanating from On High.
irish
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Sent you a text review on this poem but also can see a hidden message here, and that is; "Let's put Christ back in Christmas!"
So many forget that the reason for the season is to celebrate the birth of Jesus.
No one has left such a legacy and given us more simple principles on how to live a just life following the ten commandments.
Jesus had no property, no wardrobe beyond his simple garments, and no wealth, and yet we now found a successful Christmas on the amount of money spent by consumers.
The "Brightest Light" is indeed the "Right Light," emanating from On High.
irish
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Hey Irish, thanks so much for the great review.
It's good to hear from you this holiday season. I've been working a lot however I'm taking a sabbatical from today until January 31st. Thanks again for the six Stars. May you and yours have a Merry Christmas and a bright and successful New Year
Blessings,
Darren
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a very important invitation for the reader. With the unkind climate in which we live, this message is vital. This is well written. Happy holidays, Darren
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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This is a very important invitation for the reader. With the unkind climate in which we live, this message is vital. This is well written. Happy holidays, Darren
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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Thanks so much, I really appreciate your continued support and kind reviews. is this your closes I want to extend my sincere appreciation for all of your wonderful reviews and kind words here. It is a pleasure and honor to write with you here, and it is my prayer that you and yours have happy holidays also.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
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Darren, Thank you for the kind wishes. Lets hope next year sends up good fortune in all level of our life.
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The Brightest Light, edited
Christmas Time has arrived again
closing my eyes, I remember when
We used to go caroling door-to-door-
they would always ask for more!
My father played his gifted guitar
I looked up to see a shining star
My brothers and I sang of truth
with the exuberance of youth
Singing loudest was Bruce of nine,
clear young voice sharply defined
Shawn was seven and I had five years
Harmonious lessons; I learned to hear
Dressed alike in choral attire
made us a crisp, captivating choir
The line of our heads a pleasing slope
vocalizing of cheer, love and hope
To my heart this introduced and instilled
a wondrous desire to shape and fulfill
One of my life's many valued tasks
warmth of spreading cheer, I bask
As we sang with joy on our faces
reflections of the many graces
Bestowed on all this holiday season,
a gentle reminder of the real reason
That we celebrate the Royal birth-
One that fills our hearts with mirth
Ask, and ye shall surely receive,
if you would but choose to believe
If you are a friendly neighbor,
with others you will find favor-
For we must respect all beliefs
If with them we are to find relief
Give unto all with a cheerful heart
and many blessings, He will impart
Look, the snowflakes softly falling-
close your eyes, The Spirit calling
Celebrate the birth of The Boy
that came to fill our hearts with joy
He said "I come not to condemn,
but to give abundant life", to them
Who receive the greatest gift,
that clearly closed and sealed the rift
Between mankind and eternity,
que sera, sera; what will be, will be
If you are one, heed the calling
and be careful to not be falling
For one of lifes many deceptions,
so many contradictory misconceptions
Be simple, with old-school integrity,
and with your environment, be
Harmonious, helpful and kind
and we will be of a similar mind
Be truly grateful for this time,
as you read my restorative rhyme-
Do that which is noble, just and right
so that all may embrace
The Brightest Light
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I like this stanza "If you are a friendly neighbor,
with others you will find favor-
For we must respect all beliefs
If with them we are to find relief"
It seems to be the crux of the message.
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Thanks so much I appreciate your input on my edit. What exactly is a Crux? That's the only time I remember hearing it is on a Frank Zappa album apostrophe the man that was talking to the dog when a dog shed it should be easy to see that's the Crux of the biscuit is the apostrophe. Thanks so much and a happy holiday to you and yours! Blessings, brother by Drew Cole, AKA Darren
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Crux is the main point, the substance of, where everything comes together.
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Thanks so much for your help
Comment from lyenochka
Amen! May all embrace the Brightest Light of Christ! I loved that you reminded us of His words: "He said "I come not to condemn, but to give abundant life."
I hope you'll move this poem into the Christmas Poem contest as you placed it in the Free Verse one and since it rhymes and is clearly structured, it could be disqualified in that one.
Que Sera', what will be will be (really should be que sera sera - if you wanted to have that second "will be" meaning and no apostrophe.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Amen! May all embrace the Brightest Light of Christ! I loved that you reminded us of His words: "He said "I come not to condemn, but to give abundant life."
I hope you'll move this poem into the Christmas Poem contest as you placed it in the Free Verse one and since it rhymes and is clearly structured, it could be disqualified in that one.
Que Sera', what will be will be (really should be que sera sera - if you wanted to have that second "will be" meaning and no apostrophe.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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You are a treasure here how do I switch it from free verse to Christmas poetry?
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Hi Darren!
The best way would be to send a note to Tom and have him link it to the right contest. The other way that I can think of is to copy and paste into the Christmas contest and submit but you'd need to change the title. Then you could use the Free Verse one for one of your great free verse poems. Hope you get it into the right one!
Blessings on your Christmas celebrations!
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Hi Darren!
The best way would be to send a note to Tom and have him link it to the right contest. The other way that I can think of is to copy and paste into the Christmas contest and submit but you'd need to change the title. Then you could use the Free Verse one for one of your great free verse poems. Hope you get it into the right one!
Blessings on your Christmas celebrations!
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Awesome thanks so much for your support I've been working hard making money and I'm taking a sabbatical starting New Years Eve to January 30th to visit my parents in Billings Montana and Thermopolis Wyoming. As I live in Sacramento California. And I know that I certainly appreciate your help here. A pleasure and an honor to share our craft!
Blessings,
Darren
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So glad you'll have a sabbatical, Darren! Blessings to you and hope you have a WONDERFUL trip!
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Thanks again for your help, I have sent a note to Tom and he did enter it into the Christmas poetry contest!
By the way, here's the new edit:
Christmas Time has arrived again
closing my eyes, I remember when
We used to go caroling door-to-door-
they would always ask for more!
My father played his gifted guitar
I looked up to see a shining star
My brothers and I sang of truth
with the exuberance of youth
Singing loudest was Bruce of nine,
clear young voice sharply defined
Shawn was seven and I had five years
Harmonious lessons; I learned to hear
Dressed alike in choral attire
made us a crisp, captivating choir
The line of our heads a pleasing slope
vocalizing of cheer, love and hope
To my heart this introduced and instilled
a wondrous desire to shape and fulfill
One of my life's many valued tasks
warmth of spreading cheer, I bask
As we sang with joy on our faces
reflections of the many graces
Bestowed on all this holiday season,
a gentle reminder of the real reason
That we celebrate the Royal birth-
One that fills our hearts with mirth
Ask, and ye shall surely receive,
if you would but choose to believe
If you are a friendly neighbor,
with others you will find favor-
For we must respect all beliefs
If with them we are to find relief
Give unto all with a cheerful heart
and many blessings, He will impart
Look, the snowflakes softly falling-
close your eyes, The Spirit calling
Celebrate the birth of The Boy
that came to fill our hearts with joy
He said "I come not to condemn,
but to give abundant life", to them
Who receive the greatest gift,
that clearly closed and sealed the rift
Between mankind and eternity,
que sera, sera; what will be, will be
If you are one, heed the calling
and be careful to not be falling
For one of lifes many deceptions,
so many contradictory misconceptions
Be simple, with old-school integrity,
and with your environment, be
Harmonious, helpful and kind
and we will be of a similar mind
Be truly grateful for this time,
as you read my restorative rhyme-
Do that which is noble, just and right
so that all may embrace
The Brightest Light
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Amen! I'm so glad your musical family could spread Christmas musical joy with the neighborhood!
Loved your changes. Would also suggest: For one of lifes many deceptions, (life's)
Best wishes in the contest and best wishes for a joyous Christmas and wonderful New Year!
Comment from w.j.debi
You convey a warm and cheerful sentiment. During this season--and all year--we should share joy and contentment, be loving and tolerant of others. Most of all we should do as you say in your final two
May all embrace
The Brightest Light
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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You convey a warm and cheerful sentiment. During this season--and all year--we should share joy and contentment, be loving and tolerant of others. Most of all we should do as you say in your final two
May all embrace
The Brightest Light
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Thanks so much for your one kind review, I really appreciate your input here. It's a pleasure and an honor to write with you and share our craft, and may you be blessed this holiday season.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
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Christmas Time has arrived again
closing my eyes, I remember when
We used to go caroling door-to-door-
they would always ask for more!
My father played his gifted guitar
I looked up to see a shining star
My brothers and I sang of truth
with the exuberance of youth
Singing loudest was Bruce of nine,
clear young voice sharply defined
Shawn was seven and I had five years
Harmonious lessons; I learned to hear
Dressed alike in choral attire
made us a crisp, captivating choir
The line of our heads a pleasing slope
vocalizing of cheer, love and hope
To my heart this introduced and instilled
a wondrous desire to shape and fulfill
One of my life's many valued tasks
warmth of spreading cheer, I bask
As we sang with joy on our faces
reflections of the many graces
Bestowed on all this holiday season,
a gentle reminder of the real reason
That we celebrate the Royal birth-
One that fills our hearts with mirth
Ask, and ye shall surely receive,
if you would but choose to believe
If you are a friendly neighbor,
with others you will find favor-
For we must respect all beliefs
If with them we are to find relief
Give unto all with a cheerful heart
and many blessings, He will impart
Look, the snowflakes softly falling-
close your eyes, The Spirit calling
Celebrate the birth of The Boy
that came to fill our hearts with joy
He said "I come not to condemn,
but to give abundant life", to them
Who receive the greatest gift,
that clearly closed and sealed the rift
Between mankind and eternity,
que sera, sera; what will be, will be
If you are one, heed the calling
and be careful to not be falling
For one of lifes many deceptions,
so many contradictory misconceptions
Be simple, with old-school integrity,
and with your environment, be
Harmonious, helpful and kind
and we will be of a similar mind
Be truly grateful for this time,
as you read my restorative rhyme-
Do that which is noble, just and right
so that all may embrace
The Brightest Light
Comment from Gail Denham
Well said and I sure remember those days of caroling - and of sing-a-longs around the piano - and even now my bro/law would pull a big trailer with his tractor and we'd all climb aboard and sing carols around the neighborhood. A time of joy.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Well said and I sure remember those days of caroling - and of sing-a-longs around the piano - and even now my bro/law would pull a big trailer with his tractor and we'd all climb aboard and sing carols around the neighborhood. A time of joy.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Thanks so much for your time and consideration.
I really appreciate your review and it is my prayer that you and your family are blessed this Holiday Season.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
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Christmas Time has arrived again
closing my eyes, I remember when
We used to go caroling door-to-door-
they would always ask for more!
My father played his gifted guitar
I looked up to see a shining star
My brothers and I sang of truth
with the exuberance of youth
Singing loudest was Bruce of nine,
clear young voice sharply defined
Shawn was seven and I had five years
Harmonious lessons; I learned to hear
Dressed alike in choral attire
made us a crisp, captivating choir
The line of our heads a pleasing slope
vocalizing of cheer, love and hope
To my heart this introduced and instilled
a wondrous desire to shape and fulfill
One of my life's many valued tasks
warmth of spreading cheer, I bask
As we sang with joy on our faces
reflections of the many graces
Bestowed on all this holiday season,
a gentle reminder of the real reason
That we celebrate the Royal birth-
One that fills our hearts with mirth
Ask, and ye shall surely receive,
if you would but choose to believe
If you are a friendly neighbor,
with others you will find favor-
For we must respect all beliefs
If with them we are to find relief
Give unto all with a cheerful heart
and many blessings, He will impart
Look, the snowflakes softly falling-
close your eyes, The Spirit calling
Celebrate the birth of The Boy
that came to fill our hearts with joy
He said "I come not to condemn,
but to give abundant life", to them
Who receive the greatest gift,
that clearly closed and sealed the rift
Between mankind and eternity,
que sera, sera; what will be, will be
If you are one, heed the calling
and be careful to not be falling
For one of lifes many deceptions,
so many contradictory misconceptions
Be simple, with old-school integrity,
and with your environment, be
Harmonious, helpful and kind
and we will be of a similar mind
Be truly grateful for this time,
as you read my restorative rhyme-
Do that which is noble, just and right
so that all may embrace
The Brightest Light
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are happy memories of singing carols. I have fond memories of my Mother who loved to sing and we would all sing carols together at Christmas, it was such a joyous time back then when I was about 8 years old, you brought those memories back to me with your reminiscing here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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These are happy memories of singing carols. I have fond memories of my Mother who loved to sing and we would all sing carols together at Christmas, it was such a joyous time back then when I was about 8 years old, you brought those memories back to me with your reminiscing here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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thanks so much for your continued support here and thank you for embracing the memories of Christmas Past.
I am grateful, and it is truly an honor and a blessing to write and fellowship with you here.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
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Christmas Time has arrived again
closing my eyes, I remember when
We used to go caroling door-to-door-
they would always ask for more!
My father played his gifted guitar
I looked up to see a shining star
My brothers and I sang of truth
with the exuberance of youth
Singing loudest was Bruce of nine,
clear young voice sharply defined
Shawn was seven and I had five years
Harmonious lessons; I learned to hear
Dressed alike in choral attire
made us a crisp, captivating choir
The line of our heads a pleasing slope
vocalizing of cheer, love and hope
To my heart this introduced and instilled
a wondrous desire to shape and fulfill
One of my life's many valued tasks
warmth of spreading cheer, I bask
As we sang with joy on our faces
reflections of the many graces
Bestowed on all this holiday season,
a gentle reminder of the real reason
That we celebrate the Royal birth-
One that fills our hearts with mirth
Ask, and ye shall surely receive,
if you would but choose to believe
If you are a friendly neighbor,
with others you will find favor-
For we must respect all beliefs
If with them we are to find relief
Give unto all with a cheerful heart
and many blessings, He will impart
Look, the snowflakes softly falling-
close your eyes, The Spirit calling
Celebrate the birth of The Boy
that came to fill our hearts with joy
He said "I come not to condemn,
but to give abundant life", to them
Who receive the greatest gift,
that clearly closed and sealed the rift
Between mankind and eternity,
que sera, sera; what will be, will be
If you are one, heed the calling
and be careful to not be falling
For one of lifes many deceptions,
so many contradictory misconceptions
Be simple, with old-school integrity,
and with your environment, be
Harmonious, helpful and kind
and we will be of a similar mind
Be truly grateful for this time,
as you read my restorative rhyme-
Do that which is noble, just and right
so that all may embrace
The Brightest Light
Comment from Bucketlist
You did a great job with this one, Daren (and Perry) it gives direction for the lost, highlights the REAL reason to celebrate Christmas. A little bio helps to 'see' the writer a little more. May you have a peaceful blessed season. Your goals to keep on the right track #1in 2020
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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You did a great job with this one, Daren (and Perry) it gives direction for the lost, highlights the REAL reason to celebrate Christmas. A little bio helps to 'see' the writer a little more. May you have a peaceful blessed season. Your goals to keep on the right track #1in 2020
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Thanks so much Trisha.
And the hits your clothes, you have been a very special wonderful friend here to acknowledge together our craft.
It is my prayer AQ also will be blessed this holiday season, with acknowledgement of positive goals for 2020.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
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Thanks so much Trisha.
And the hits your clothes,
What does that mean ? LOL
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Done Quick Google typo.
What I meant is that as this year endsoh, it has been a successful and fulfilling your writing here with you download. It is a pleasure and an honor, and thank you for joining me and having a prospective and prosperous view of 2020
