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Comment from Joan E.
I am pleased you were inspired by Gloria's poem and chose Pantygynt form as your vehicle. I enjoyed your rhymes and rhythms and the glorious "pose" of the mountain goat. Cheers- Joan
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I am pleased you were inspired by Gloria's poem and chose Pantygynt form as your vehicle. I enjoyed your rhymes and rhythms and the glorious "pose" of the mountain goat. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Gorgeous photo choice. Here is the heart of the matter, in my opinion: My trusty camera in my hand,
I wait for it to pose.
And then, as if this day were planned,
it lifts a noble nose.
Best...goat...poem...ever.
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Gorgeous photo choice. Here is the heart of the matter, in my opinion: My trusty camera in my hand,
I wait for it to pose.
And then, as if this day were planned,
it lifts a noble nose.
Best...goat...poem...ever.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
Comment from Teri7
Dawn, This is a very interesting and very well written poem you have penned about the Nanny goat. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely picture. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
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Dawn, This is a very interesting and very well written poem you have penned about the Nanny goat. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely picture. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a beautifully written piece. It is graceful and lyrical in both construction and content making for a sublimely serene and enjoyable read. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This is a beautifully written piece. It is graceful and lyrical in both construction and content making for a sublimely serene and enjoyable read. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Dawn. The image of the gorgeous mountain goat caught my eye immediately. It is the animal which represents the astrological sign of Capricorn. It indicates that through effort they can ascend to the highest heights and from there see far and beyond. Your poem is well done in Jim's new form. Marilyn
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Hi Dawn. The image of the gorgeous mountain goat caught my eye immediately. It is the animal which represents the astrological sign of Capricorn. It indicates that through effort they can ascend to the highest heights and from there see far and beyond. Your poem is well done in Jim's new form. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
Comment from robyn corum
Dawn,
So.... you climbed to the top of that mountain to chase that goat for that image. Wow. I had no idea that we should add rock/mountain climber to your list of strengths and talents. As well as photographer! The more we learn, the more we marvel! *smile*
Great photo -- great poem. Fun. Made me smile.
Honestly - This is one of the best posts I have seen using this form. The flow is super and the topic is just jolly. Thanks so much!
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Dawn,
So.... you climbed to the top of that mountain to chase that goat for that image. Wow. I had no idea that we should add rock/mountain climber to your list of strengths and talents. As well as photographer! The more we learn, the more we marvel! *smile*
Great photo -- great poem. Fun. Made me smile.
Honestly - This is one of the best posts I have seen using this form. The flow is super and the topic is just jolly. Thanks so much!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
Aw, this is a terrific Pantygynt, Dawn and what a nice looking mountain goat. I always remember the time many years ago when one of them fell into a mineral pool at Radium hot springs. Surprised us quite a bit, but likely the goat much more. haha
You've done the form beautifully well and Pantygynt would agree. :)
Gloria
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Aw, this is a terrific Pantygynt, Dawn and what a nice looking mountain goat. I always remember the time many years ago when one of them fell into a mineral pool at Radium hot springs. Surprised us quite a bit, but likely the goat much more. haha
You've done the form beautifully well and Pantygynt would agree. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
Comment from beizanten
A pretty good opening stanza. A simple yet good second stanza, pretty lighthearted. Another good stanza. A very good ending stanza, I like the last line. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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A pretty good opening stanza. A simple yet good second stanza, pretty lighthearted. Another good stanza. A very good ending stanza, I like the last line. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem is real and I like the gorgeous picture you took. Such great wording describing the mountain goat; are they frightening creatures...would they perhaps run toward a person?
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Your poem is real and I like the gorgeous picture you took. Such great wording describing the mountain goat; are they frightening creatures...would they perhaps run toward a person?
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thanks very much. I don't think they would ever try to hurt anyone intentionally, but I don't know. :)
