Where God Rests His Head
A kyrielle29 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
This is a beautiful kyrielle Rod! It is imaginative and thought-provoking as well as perfectly metered and rhymed. The accompanying picture seems perfect for the theme. I loved everything about this. Congratulations for winning the contest too! Not much of a surprise. ;p
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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This is a beautiful kyrielle Rod! It is imaginative and thought-provoking as well as perfectly metered and rhymed. The accompanying picture seems perfect for the theme. I loved everything about this. Congratulations for winning the contest too! Not much of a surprise. ;p
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much, MissMerri, for this lovely review and those six bright stars. I am thrilled you love everything about my Kyrielle. Rod
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Rod. Oh my, God never sleeps. He's got his hands/arms full with us humans. This is a very nice Kyrielle poem that asks a human question of a Deity. Let's hope he remains on the job 24/7 for our sake. Congratulations for winning the contest. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Hi Rod. Oh my, God never sleeps. He's got his hands/arms full with us humans. This is a very nice Kyrielle poem that asks a human question of a Deity. Let's hope he remains on the job 24/7 for our sake. Congratulations for winning the contest. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Hi Marilyn. I am so pleased you enjoyed my Kyrielle and I appreciate the congrats. Several reviewers agreed with you that God NEVER rests. I think my Speaker?s question may be rhetorical.
Rod
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Rod. Your kryielle is beautifully expressed in theme, format, imag, color scheme, and message. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Rod. Your kryielle is beautifully expressed in theme, format, imag, color scheme, and message. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Thank you for sharing my Kyrielle, Jan, the congrats, and that super praise. Rod
Comment from lyenochka
What a beautiful kyrielle - a perfect form for a spiritual reflection. And we are thankful that God never sleeps and He always keeps watch over us. I loved your lovely nature descriptions and the sense of sorrow that the angels must have watching the human problems.
Congratulations on the win!!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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What a beautiful kyrielle - a perfect form for a spiritual reflection. And we are thankful that God never sleeps and He always keeps watch over us. I loved your lovely nature descriptions and the sense of sorrow that the angels must have watching the human problems.
Congratulations on the win!!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review, lyenochka. I am so pleased you enjoyed the imagery and my spiritual theme. Rod
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is a fantastic poem! It is so thought-provoking. Where does God test His head? I know that God is unknowable to us in His true form, but the compassion in us causes an empathy for God and we want to feel He is resting after all of His mighty work that happens every day. xoxo
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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This is a fantastic poem! It is so thought-provoking. Where does God test His head? I know that God is unknowable to us in His true form, but the compassion in us causes an empathy for God and we want to feel He is resting after all of His mighty work that happens every day. xoxo
Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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i am so pleased you found my kyrielle thought-provoking, Diana. I truly appreciate your kind praise. Rod
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were descriptive, creative and interesting. I really
liked how in each stanza the last line was repeated. The poem had
a calming effect for me. The artwork is perfect and compliments this
poem well.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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The author's words were descriptive, creative and interesting. I really
liked how in each stanza the last line was repeated. The poem had
a calming effect for me. The artwork is perfect and compliments this
poem well.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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I am so flattered you found my kyrielle descriptive, creative, and interesting. I am also pleased the poem had a calming effect on you. Many thanks for sharing. Rod
Comment from papa55mike
What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the picture. I've always wondered if God slept, or not. Interesting question!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bles.
mike
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the picture. I've always wondered if God slept, or not. Interesting question!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bles.
mike
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem so much, Mike. Many thanks for sharing and your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, this is very well written kyrielle. The repeated line sits comfortably in place and none of the stanzas sound contrived to meet the demands of this poetry form. Each stanzas works well on its own. Very well done with a really lovely picture to accompany. Good Luck - regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Hello anon, this is very well written kyrielle. The repeated line sits comfortably in place and none of the stanzas sound contrived to meet the demands of this poetry form. Each stanzas works well on its own. Very well done with a really lovely picture to accompany. Good Luck - regards Dorothy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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I am very pleased you like my kyrielle, Dorothy, and appreciate your kind praise. Mamy thanks for sharing. Rod
Comment from Bobby Jo
Upon the hearts of his creation upon the souls who believe, upon the horizon of his divine creation, that is where God rests his head. He doesn't sleep, but comforts us to rest. This is good.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Upon the hearts of his creation upon the souls who believe, upon the horizon of his divine creation, that is where God rests his head. He doesn't sleep, but comforts us to rest. This is good.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my kyrielle, Bobby Jo. Many thanks for your kind praise and those six bright stars. Rod
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is a wonderful smooth meter in these words and your repeated line gave this poem a sense of purpose. Good rhymes and sentiments, a joy to read, I wish I had a six for you, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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There is a wonderful smooth meter in these words and your repeated line gave this poem a sense of purpose. Good rhymes and sentiments, a joy to read, I wish I had a six for you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Hi Dolly. I am delighted you enjoyed my kyrielle, especially its refrain. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
