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Comment from jaydub99
I enjoyed the simplicity of this piece. You didn't try and put a picture that, in my opinion, would have distracted from your words. I read it and then read your author input and read it again. I appreciated it even more. It made me think of sitting at a restaurant and watching all the people look at cell phones instead of sharing or connecting. Great submission!
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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I enjoyed the simplicity of this piece. You didn't try and put a picture that, in my opinion, would have distracted from your words. I read it and then read your author input and read it again. I appreciated it even more. It made me think of sitting at a restaurant and watching all the people look at cell phones instead of sharing or connecting. Great submission!
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Thanks so much for the excellent review and your perspective on the poem. I think you got exactly what I was trying to say in this piece. estory
