A Compilation of Short stories
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19 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
"imbeciles" what a marvelous definition of humans. This hedgehog has it all together and understands the two-legged animal, and the "stupid" things they do, well.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
"imbeciles" what a marvelous definition of humans. This hedgehog has it all together and understands the two-legged animal, and the "stupid" things they do, well.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Wow, Brett. I love this review. Thank you so very much. I'm so glad you just 'got it' All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a well written story, my friend. I am enjoying all of these creature stories that have been posted recently. They are delightfully entertaining. I don't know how a government can go on strike, but ours (US) has done it as well~Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
This is a well written story, my friend. I am enjoying all of these creature stories that have been posted recently. They are delightfully entertaining. I don't know how a government can go on strike, but ours (US) has done it as well~Debbie
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Thanks a lot, Debbie, I'm so glad you liked it.TThanks a lot. Ulla:)))
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I love this crazy little story, Ulla. The thought of anybody walking a hedgehog just cracked me up! Well written I thought, so I wish you all the best for the competition. Hugs, Giddy xx
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
I love this crazy little story, Ulla. The thought of anybody walking a hedgehog just cracked me up! Well written I thought, so I wish you all the best for the competition. Hugs, Giddy xx
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Awe, thank you so much, Giddy. I just couldn't resist when I saw the picture. It all came to me, and I had so much fun great writing it. Big hugs back to you. Ulla xxx
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this little piece is a good description of how a pet might feel about being paraded on a leash. Especially this little fella.
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
I think this little piece is a good description of how a pet might feel about being paraded on a leash. Especially this little fella.
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Hi Sharon, Yeah, the poor thing, is not a happy chappy, is he? Thank you so much. Ulla:)))
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't believe they are doing it to him, either. A hedgehog isn't really a walking pet. LOL Oh my!!! I does make for a cute post and I enjoyed reading. The poor animal.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
I can't believe they are doing it to him, either. A hedgehog isn't really a walking pet. LOL Oh my!!! I does make for a cute post and I enjoyed reading. The poor animal.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much, Barbara. I'm sorry I'm late with this. I'm glad you liked it. Ulla:)))
Comment from estory
I think you did a great job giving this hedgehog a personality and a voice, complaining about his nature is being harnessed by the humans who can't even get near him. I loved that ending reference to the madness in England, a nice humorous touch. This brings to mind a video I saw of a woman who took her dog to a hairdresser and had him made up and dyed to look like a giraffe for Halloween. estory
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
I think you did a great job giving this hedgehog a personality and a voice, complaining about his nature is being harnessed by the humans who can't even get near him. I loved that ending reference to the madness in England, a nice humorous touch. This brings to mind a video I saw of a woman who took her dog to a hairdresser and had him made up and dyed to look like a giraffe for Halloween. estory
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thanks a lot, estory. First,I couldn't resist the picture and then I just had fun writing it. I'm glad you liked it and caught on to the ending. All best. Ulla:))
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Ulla. That's a fine poem about a cute little hedgehog the can't believe how the two-legged people are treating him. I'll agree with you from the point of view of the hedgehog. He is smarter than a lot of people. Robert
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
Hello Ulla. That's a fine poem about a cute little hedgehog the can't believe how the two-legged people are treating him. I'll agree with you from the point of view of the hedgehog. He is smarter than a lot of people. Robert
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much, Robert. I'm glad you liked my wee story. All the best. Ulla:))
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You're welcome
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I doubt very much they will do this to him when he is an adult. Yes, People are stupid, stupid, stupid. LOL I think you are missing a bunch of quotation marks, Ulla, otherwise this is a great flash fiction Well done, Dear. Well done.
Nancy:)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
I doubt very much they will do this to him when he is an adult. Yes, People are stupid, stupid, stupid. LOL I think you are missing a bunch of quotation marks, Ulla, otherwise this is a great flash fiction Well done, Dear. Well done.
Nancy:)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much, Nancy. I have now added all the quotation marks. Don't know where they disappeared to. Thanks a lot for pointing it out. I'm glad you like it. Ulla xx
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This ultra-concise fiction piece is so well-written and cute. Having your little character express amazement at the stupidity of humans is amusing
is a nice touch. I like the ending.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
This ultra-concise fiction piece is so well-written and cute. Having your little character express amazement at the stupidity of humans is amusing
is a nice touch. I like the ending.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much, Janice. I'm so glad that you liked it. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment from Pam (respa)
-This is toooo cute, Ulla.
-I wonder if this is really
someone's pet?
-I love the story and how
you really get into the
character of the hedgehog.
-He has had it, by George!
-I like his comment about
the "prickly things."
-I think you should have a
follow up about his strike,
and let us know how it goes!
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
-This is toooo cute, Ulla.
-I wonder if this is really
someone's pet?
-I love the story and how
you really get into the
character of the hedgehog.
-He has had it, by George!
-I like his comment about
the "prickly things."
-I think you should have a
follow up about his strike,
and let us know how it goes!
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Wow, Pam. Thank you so much. I'm so glad that you liked it. I actually had great fun writing it. People can really be so stupid. I may just take you up on your suggestion. I'll have a think about it. Thanks a lot again. Ulla:)))
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You are very welcome, Ulla. It was fun reading it, and the picture was so cute. Glad you liked the suggestion-just think, you could use all kinds of unusual pets!