The Fullers Find the Father
a 3-6-9 suite8 total reviews
Comment from Darlene Franklin
What a clever use of consonance in this poem! This poem could be a movie, from 9 short lines. Well down with the form, and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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What a clever use of consonance in this poem! This poem could be a movie, from 9 short lines. Well down with the form, and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Darlene, for the great review. Bill
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You're welcome.
Comment from Susan Larson
How masterfully you kept to the 3-6-9 poem format but also managed to start every significant word with f, EXCEPT God and Jesus. They both radiate through all those fs, as well they should. And in your foto, the Fullers are following footsteps forward. Fine fanstory feature.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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How masterfully you kept to the 3-6-9 poem format but also managed to start every significant word with f, EXCEPT God and Jesus. They both radiate through all those fs, as well they should. And in your foto, the Fullers are following footsteps forward. Fine fanstory feature.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Fank?s for the favorable refiew, Susan. Bill
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; )
Comment from LisaMay
Your inventive poem is 'effing' good. I hope the new fascination is a fulfilling fixation for the Fullers. (It should give them a fuller life than what they had before.) Fearful freedom is an interesting juxtaposition.
I think it should be 'femme fatale'.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Your inventive poem is 'effing' good. I hope the new fascination is a fulfilling fixation for the Fullers. (It should give them a fuller life than what they had before.) Fearful freedom is an interesting juxtaposition.
I think it should be 'femme fatale'.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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You are so rightte. Thanks for your excellent review. Bill
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My pleasure. I enjoyed it.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Clever, creative, and how revealing to point out that fear seems to be both an obstacle and a necessary accompaniment to big changes like the Fullers went through. We get told at church the ladies usually find faith first, but this was a reversal of expectations. I think I usually see 'femme fatale' more often. Nice job.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Clever, creative, and how revealing to point out that fear seems to be both an obstacle and a necessary accompaniment to big changes like the Fullers went through. We get told at church the ladies usually find faith first, but this was a reversal of expectations. I think I usually see 'femme fatale' more often. Nice job.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thanks, CC, for the spelling catch. I probably don?t use that description enough.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have no idead who these people are, but I expect they got their comeuppance? People can often be taken in by others because of their vulnerability, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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I have no idead who these people are, but I expect they got their comeuppance? People can often be taken in by others because of their vulnerability, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Fred and Fiona Fuller are fictional converted Christians.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderFul oFFering of F's For the contest, Bill! ;) :) Is this perhaps a daughter? or Friend of the Family? What ever the case, I'm quite sure they're honored that you included them as the Focus of your Faithful testimony!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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A wonderFul oFFering of F's For the contest, Bill! ;) :) Is this perhaps a daughter? or Friend of the Family? What ever the case, I'm quite sure they're honored that you included them as the Focus of your Faithful testimony!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Yvette.
Comment from kahpot
What an excellent and very clever story in a poem describing the finding of Faith for the "flawed Fullers" the spacing and presentation of this suite and the artwork is wonderful and will do well for this prompt, best wishes for you****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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What an excellent and very clever story in a poem describing the finding of Faith for the "flawed Fullers" the spacing and presentation of this suite and the artwork is wonderful and will do well for this prompt, best wishes for you****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you, kahpot, for the upbeat review. Bill
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver three complete stanzas following a technically sound 3-6-9 syllable count in each. This is really clever the way you use them to tell a complete story in alliterative style. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver three complete stanzas following a technically sound 3-6-9 syllable count in each. This is really clever the way you use them to tell a complete story in alliterative style. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you, MA
