Circles
chasing the circles27 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your Loop Poem with its repeats and rhymes. The rippling effects and reinforcing picture added to its intensity. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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I enjoyed your Loop Poem with its repeats and rhymes. The rippling effects and reinforcing picture added to its intensity. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review your wishes are greatly appreciated.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Iza. Your poem for the Loop contest does leave us with a mental image of spinning around... great photography choice... I do wish you luck in the contest.
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Hello Iza. Your poem for the Loop contest does leave us with a mental image of spinning around... great photography choice... I do wish you luck in the contest.
Melissa
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words
Comment from Cindy Warren
I'm afraid I don't know much about the loop poem, but I found it a fun read. I think everyone has had the feeling they were running in circles at some time. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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I'm afraid I don't know much about the loop poem, but I found it a fun read. I think everyone has had the feeling they were running in circles at some time. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a structurally sound Loop Poem. The content is inspiring in a delightfully fun way. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a structurally sound Loop Poem. The content is inspiring in a delightfully fun way. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind comments.
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I find it to be very true. Love is complicated and many times it is circular. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I find it to be very true. Love is complicated and many times it is circular. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
Great form in your looping poem which you looped and rhymed per the contest requirements. The last line made me stop to think what it meant. Since you don't have any syllable requirements, I would suggest maybe:
"Breathing like a hound"
Completely up to you!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Great form in your looping poem which you looped and rhymed per the contest requirements. The last line made me stop to think what it meant. Since you don't have any syllable requirements, I would suggest maybe:
"Breathing like a hound"
Completely up to you!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your kind comments and suggestions.
Comment from Raul1
This poem is very funny and hilarious. So many circles to follow. I got into the loop of circles in this poem. Very creative! Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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This poem is very funny and hilarious. So many circles to follow. I got into the loop of circles in this poem. Very creative! Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your kind comments and encouragements.
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your thought-provoking poem conveys a strong theme about the power of the mind and how our thoughts can be lucid or chaotic, running circles
until we lose focus.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Your thought-provoking poem conveys a strong theme about the power of the mind and how our thoughts can be lucid or chaotic, running circles
until we lose focus.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your kind comments:)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I like that you have chosen to write a loop poem about circles. Very clever.
But, my interpretation of the rules is that the looping of words continue through each stanza. The first word of stanza two is the same word as the last line in stanza one.
You might want to look into this.
Good luck to you either way.
Sharon
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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I like that you have chosen to write a loop poem about circles. Very clever.
But, my interpretation of the rules is that the looping of words continue through each stanza. The first word of stanza two is the same word as the last line in stanza one.
You might want to look into this.
Good luck to you either way.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your kind comments and suggestions.
Comment from kahpot
This is a wonderful loop poem, if I had one suggestion it would be to maybe lengthen some of the lines which would give you more room for explanation-your last stanza for example "loud breathing" could be (loud is my breathing) - (breathing from the hound) or (cloud) I very much enjoyed this read and think the subject of running in circles is an excellent one, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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This is a wonderful loop poem, if I had one suggestion it would be to maybe lengthen some of the lines which would give you more room for explanation-your last stanza for example "loud breathing" could be (loud is my breathing) - (breathing from the hound) or (cloud) I very much enjoyed this read and think the subject of running in circles is an excellent one, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your kind comments and suggestions.
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You are very welcome
