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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the waiting list to be reviewed that keeps growing this time of the year while the yankees have summer days and go out to play, we in the southside of the world keep on writing each day.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
    Sandra good rhyme there Sis I noticed ok! Thanks.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Your rhyming scheme is perfect. I agree. I have summers off because I teach and I try to stock up funny money for the school year and nobody posts. DARN!!! Good luck with the competition.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
    Thanks Barbara. A teacher actually said she is still around so there is hope. I have a feeling the Northern Summer break is not all holidays or vacation for teachers like here some people think our teachers get 10 weeks holiday or vacation a year but I know that is not so! When I worked at Mac U the Uni would be closed down 3 months of the year and then some but we still had work to do and Summer Schools and so on.
Comment from LisaMay
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Aussie Aussie Aussie! Cool poem! Anything with the word 'dunny' in it gets my attention. It's a good poem... successful rhymes and a relevant message. It sure starts to get expensive promoting our work. I try to review a lot but that takes so much time when I'd rather be writing.
I'm getting about the same number of reviews so not everyone in USA is on holiday. I went away for 2 weeks myself to Airlie Beach/Townsville, from NZ to get some winter warmth, but apparently the weather back home in NZ was great and the Qld weather was overcast and cool with only 2 sunny days out of 14!!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
    Yeah Lisa Thanks for your great review. Hope you will vote when the contest ends. It is all part of End times mate. Seasons all getting re-arranged. I still remember the odd Christmas Day being wet and cold even.
Comment from judiverse
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I don't know. It seems like this place is still pretty busy. People are writing like crazy. If you want to promote a prose work, there are at least 80 pieces ahead of you, and there are probably scads more waiting in line for poetry. Maybe they're too busy writing to do any reviewing! Just be patient. I have a backlog of things to review, but not as bad as I've had previously. Your poem is great fun. I like the humorous tone, and you've done excellent work with your rhyme. judi

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
    Thanks Judi. I am glad you are busy. I guess this got stirred up as I recently did a big promotion and got hardly any lookers and then I realized these three months might be a bit lean. But a teacher even said they are still around so go figure.
reply by judiverse on 26-Jun-2019
    You're very welcome. That's the way things turn out. It's hard to figure what will attract the readers. judi
Comment from Sally Law
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I'm semi retired on blindness disability so I can review as much as my eyes hold up. A great laugh and good fun in our system of rating. We have our ups and downs, I guess.
All my best to you both,
Sally xo

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
    Thanks Sally much appreciate your lovely review.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written rhyming poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very appropriate art work to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest my friend. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Thanks Sis for your lovely review. Fortunately being assured there are still some "Up Overs" around for these three months.
Comment from Ben Colder
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You said it right poet. Funny money with very little value when pumping up the post. LOL. Good to see you posting Sankey. I always enjoy your witty works. Best to you and the Mrs.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Thanks Bro fortunately I have been reassured by a US teacher no less, that there are a few still around for these three months. Appreciate the lovely review.
Comment from tfawcus
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Three months summer holiday! Now there's an appealing thought. You're right, though, reviews do seem to be a bit thinner on the ground at the moment.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Yep I have been reassured today by a teacher no less that some are still around. I think it might be a bit up over like here on our ten week school holidays that teachers (contrary to some parents and students ideas) DO NOT get 3 months break the same as ours don't get 10 weeks holiday a year but you know that having been or still being a teacher yourself. Thanks for the great review. I made a booboo and put this on Tootsie55 by accident but fortunately it was not posted over there yet.
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for your fun poem, Geoff, and all the definitions. I am still here but will be slower next month so am glad to see your post and collect the funny money! Hope you'll stop by to review my post, too. Blessings!

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Sure will stop by...have to build mine up again now after the big promotional spend hope folks vote for me after the contest closes. Thanks for the lovely review.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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What a clever poem, Sankey. I too have noticed a difference on FanStory. Everyone's on vacation and reviews do come and go. Lots of us are so addicted though that we actually do FanStory while traveling.
Anyway, I like your poem. I particularly like
"Our works are in a queue
Still waiting for review."
Nice job.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Thanks, Debbie I have been reassured by a teacher "Up Over" no less that people are still around in your Summer. Appreciate the lovely review.