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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Exceptional
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Do not know why I do not receive your postings without having to look you up under Find A Member?

I have cut way down on my own postings for aforementioned reasons.

You are so right about the appearance others have done the same. Perhaps will pick up again, soon.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
    Hey Bro Mastery has been posting and I missed all his too. Cleve is back just to let you know. Tom says promotions only last 3 days and then they disappear but I still think it is all wrong. Maybe he needs to allow more time to pick up the Phoney. Also, perhaps we need to cut back on our fans that we follow so we get the ones we absolutely want to read. I had another posem I was gonna put up but I forget it now. Thanks.
reply by Brett Matthew West on 05-Jul-2020
    As a fan, I should receive your posts and do not. That is what I do not get. Not that they only stay up for three days.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
    yeah well same for me and Bob (Mastery)
Comment from jaded831
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You made me laugh before morning coffee, a tough job indeed. Your poem flows smoothly, your rhymes add to its appeal, your theme touches the heart of us here at fanstory. Sometimes reviewing is a chore, but when it is a very good poem reviewing is a pleasure.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thanks very much. So many have not learned the correct process in here, to read; review; post and promote. Not sure we have met before will try and check your stuff.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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I truly enjoyed the humor of it, the perfect rhyme, meter and rhythm and all the fun. It was a true treat - and I wish you luck in winning the contest. It sounds like a fun contest - I might join myself.

Thank you for sharing - it brightened my day.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Hi, the contest is long, long gone. I wanted to get this up at this time to catch a few that missed it and new folks who were not around when it ran ages ago. Not sure we have met before your membername looks somewhat familiar. Will check you out.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Earning funny money is the only way to promote your work, so get yourself into the reviewing habit! Your poem made me smile here, love the analogy, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thanks Dolly, it is an oldie just coming up for more new members as well as any who missed it last time. I am going through and moving chapters as well.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Promoting is definitely hard when you work a ton of hours, family, home life and all of it. When I think of funny money I think of my brother cuz that's what he calls the free money they give him at work. It's like a gift certificate for their company. It's only good there and he always calls that's funny money so it made me laugh when you called it that. I've never used a credit card to promote my stuff, however, I also don't promote like others do. Great job with this

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
    Thanks for coming by. Definitely harder when you work, I understand. Been hearing stories of people paying BIG BUCKS in here to get their stuff up front all the time. Also I see the regular Reviewer of the Month has won again. This joint is so corrupt but I keep meeting new people and stay, and stay and stay...sigh! Still trying to figure out who the Committee actually is ho hum!
Comment from Ulla
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Now, Geoff, I'm in Spain but, of course, that is still north of Equator. Holidays have not just started yet, but we're in the grips of the worst heat ever here in Mid and South Europe. I will admit I've fallen behind because my energy levels are not as high as usual. It's almost nine in the evening and it's still almost 35 degrees and no wind. I'm used to the heat, but this is is a bit much. During the day it's hit almost 40. Up in France they are at 45-46 degrees and people are dying. So I'm sorry I'm late with this. I really liked your poem. it's a great rant, and very well written. Kind regards to both of you, and do please forgive me for being late. I'm so hot. I'll still try to promote the next chapter of my book by tomorrow. Still a few edits to do.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
    Thanks Ulla for coming by looking forward to more on Lorenzo and his Dad and new step Mum. Well not really new anymore ha.
Comment from royowen
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Even if a love of yanks are away on holiday, there's still plenty to review, (some bloke posted one worth $2.10, another for $1.58, and yet another test, I worked out he must have spent about $700 because that how much it would cost, fortunately I review enough to promote. Tom must love them. Well done, and great mixed rhyme and narrstive Ro. Well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
    Wow! So the big spenders or "Sus"penders are out there, bro! Thanks for still being around, mate! Lord Bless.
reply by royowen on 29-Jun-2019
    Yes, one can buy success,heh heh
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
    Yeah Bro you can see why folks are moving on as I will be not too distant...keep in touch ya hea.
Comment from Carla Trinklein
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A clever poem! I'm a teacer in the US who just started teaching summer school, so yes, I'm struggling to find time to write and review. My own kids' activities keep me hopping, too. Glad there was a fun poem to read when I did get a minute to review...thanks!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
    Thanks Carla so nice to have another friend in FS. I appreciate your lovely review. Hope you will be around when the Contest closes and the Voting starts. Have a great break.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Sankey. Of course the rhyme is important and that ids all there. Your message told is clear. However, I believe participation on site is down everywhere not just in the US. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
    Yeah well I had a note from a teacher in US to say she is still around hehe. Some weirdos in Australia think our teachers get `10 weeks holiday(vacation) a year but I am sure that is not so as in America I am sure teachers don't get the whole Summer off. Yes things are down in here as a result of some of the practises. I personally have had some improvement which I may have pointed out to you before. Thanks again for the great review!
Comment from robyn corum
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Sank,

That's funny. I haven't even noticed any difference. I guess you're way more perceptive than I am. But then, I never pay much attention to all that stuff anyway. Thanks - this was fun!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
    Thanks Robyn now get the Benders back ya hea!