Pinnacle of Insight
Just the level of introversion that seeps out forming words62 total reviews
Comment from Cybertron1986
I like the relationship of the words with the encounters of challenge in the course of one's life. For example, "crawling up slippery slopes" was vividly creative and clever. As a reader, that got my attention and appreciation. Beautiful
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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I like the relationship of the words with the encounters of challenge in the course of one's life. For example, "crawling up slippery slopes" was vividly creative and clever. As a reader, that got my attention and appreciation. Beautiful
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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I truly appreciate your time you invested in reading and commenting on my work.
Comment from Gloria ....
Just love the cadence of this acrostic. Not a wasted word nor step in coming to fulmination that we enjoy each other while doing, not while being.
Another superb and insightful write. Many thanks for sharing and best of luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Just love the cadence of this acrostic. Not a wasted word nor step in coming to fulmination that we enjoy each other while doing, not while being.
Another superb and insightful write. Many thanks for sharing and best of luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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My sincerest thank you!
Comment from Karen Luciana
Hi JLR,
Your poem is interesting, well written, and makes great use of the acrostic format. I definitely like the beginning three lines the best. I think it was a fitting way to begin your thoughts for this piece. Great job.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Hi JLR,
Your poem is interesting, well written, and makes great use of the acrostic format. I definitely like the beginning three lines the best. I think it was a fitting way to begin your thoughts for this piece. Great job.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thank you for each and every word and valued cation in the construction of my work.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent writing about introversion and the choice to not engage with a certain person and their annoying personality. That can be a very good choice. Great picture of pinnacles.
Bill
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Excellent writing about introversion and the choice to not engage with a certain person and their annoying personality. That can be a very good choice. Great picture of pinnacles.
Bill
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thank you much, Bill. Have a great remainder of the week.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
I would not consider it a limit to only see a person as that which they do rather than they simply 'are'...in fact, it seems that it should be the rule rather than an opinion that we gravitate toward people with whom we relate or treat us with respect rather than 'being expected' to respect someone simply because they 'are'. :) :) A very cool acrostic offering -- I would only suggest, perhaps, popping back in there and making each of the first letters of each line (the ones that spell out your 'acrostic') bold and one size font larger. :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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I would not consider it a limit to only see a person as that which they do rather than they simply 'are'...in fact, it seems that it should be the rule rather than an opinion that we gravitate toward people with whom we relate or treat us with respect rather than 'being expected' to respect someone simply because they 'are'. :) :) A very cool acrostic offering -- I would only suggest, perhaps, popping back in there and making each of the first letters of each line (the ones that spell out your 'acrostic') bold and one size font larger. :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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I am so appreciative of your time and comments, correction is made, thank you!
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Looks great! :)
Comment from Sara R.
I could not agree with you more. Difficult people are hard to deal with. Sometimes we can be difficult ourselves without realizing it. I try to be, as far as it depends on me, to be a happy person. But some days, I'm guilty. Happiness certainly comes from within.
Sara R.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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I could not agree with you more. Difficult people are hard to deal with. Sometimes we can be difficult ourselves without realizing it. I try to be, as far as it depends on me, to be a happy person. But some days, I'm guilty. Happiness certainly comes from within.
Sara R.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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My thanks!
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect match
I found your poem to be a very interesting read.
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect match
I found your poem to be a very interesting read.
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thank you.
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Your very welcome
Cookie
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Although I enjoyed reading your poem I am a little mystified by the last line. It seems there is a very deep connotation here that is difficult for me to grasp. Yet, your allusion to difficult people, certain persona and
past relationships including slippery slopes, intrigues me. All in all, adds up to "never a dull moment".
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Although I enjoyed reading your poem I am a little mystified by the last line. It seems there is a very deep connotation here that is difficult for me to grasp. Yet, your allusion to difficult people, certain persona and
past relationships including slippery slopes, intrigues me. All in all, adds up to "never a dull moment".
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your time to read and comment on my work.
Comment from Josh Walters
We all get to choose our own paths through life and it is your choice to involve others drama in your life or not. I love the final line. Let's all get off our asses and do something!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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We all get to choose our own paths through life and it is your choice to involve others drama in your life or not. I love the final line. Let's all get off our asses and do something!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Josh, thank you!
Comment from Bichon
Yet another wise and insightful poem from you. You put a lot of work and emotion into your poems and they turn out wonderfully. Difficult people are just that, difficult, that's for sure haha. I like the photo too.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Yet another wise and insightful poem from you. You put a lot of work and emotion into your poems and they turn out wonderfully. Difficult people are just that, difficult, that's for sure haha. I like the photo too.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Your comments are like little jewels to keep me pressing on. Thank you,
