Dawn's Favorite Poems, Vol. 4
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Am I Loved"eclectic poetry favorites from 2017 & 2018
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Comment from GWinterwin
Beautiful poem Dawn. Words that flow well and rhyme very well make it easy to read. Sounds like love in the air or at least the words give that indication. Wishing you the very best my friend, God bless always.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Beautiful poem Dawn. Words that flow well and rhyme very well make it easy to read. Sounds like love in the air or at least the words give that indication. Wishing you the very best my friend, God bless always.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Love is everywhere, dear man, and I am blessed. Much love to you! Your sister in Christ, Deborah Dawn
Comment from Joan E.
Wow--that's quite a mesmerizing picture, "wreathed" in peacock feathers and wonderful rhymes! No, it's never too late for love to blossom, and I hope this love poem was written based on your current personal experience. Best wishes if that is the case and certainly good luck in the contest- Joan
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Wow--that's quite a mesmerizing picture, "wreathed" in peacock feathers and wonderful rhymes! No, it's never too late for love to blossom, and I hope this love poem was written based on your current personal experience. Best wishes if that is the case and certainly good luck in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 30-May-2019
Comment from WryWriter
A lovely poem of hope in finding a love of a lifetime. Beautiful artwork you chose for this theme. Maybe you are one of the lucky ones! : )
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A lovely poem of hope in finding a love of a lifetime. Beautiful artwork you chose for this theme. Maybe you are one of the lucky ones! : )
Comment Written 30-May-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
A superb entry for the love poem contest, Dawn. Only fitting that it be a sonnet, as to my way of thinking anyway, that is the perfect form for love.
You've written in your signature pristine iambic metre and rhymes so fresh you wouldn't even know they were.
Good luck to you with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
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A superb entry for the love poem contest, Dawn. Only fitting that it be a sonnet, as to my way of thinking anyway, that is the perfect form for love.
You've written in your signature pristine iambic metre and rhymes so fresh you wouldn't even know they were.
Good luck to you with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 30-May-2019
Comment from doggymad1
Beautiful write Dawn. to me it could be the love of another person, or the love God has for his children.
You raise a subtle point about the reluctance of people to be open about their religion. I used to cringe when my parents invited friends to join in saying the rosary once upon a time.
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Freda
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Beautiful write Dawn. to me it could be the love of another person, or the love God has for his children.
You raise a subtle point about the reluctance of people to be open about their religion. I used to cringe when my parents invited friends to join in saying the rosary once upon a time.
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 30-May-2019
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a nicely composed love poem. I feel if it's meant to be, it will be. If not, well friendship is a good thing, too. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
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This is a nicely composed love poem. I feel if it's meant to be, it will be. If not, well friendship is a good thing, too. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-May-2019
Comment from robyn corum
Dawn,
Yep, this is the kind of love that all little girls dream about --- and a FEW girls grow up to find. But only a few. And sometimes, the sad thing is that even some of those few can take their lives/love/blessings for granted. It can be hard to watch from the outside. --sigh--
A sweet and fun entry for the contest. Much good luck to you, girlfriend!
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Dawn,
Yep, this is the kind of love that all little girls dream about --- and a FEW girls grow up to find. But only a few. And sometimes, the sad thing is that even some of those few can take their lives/love/blessings for granted. It can be hard to watch from the outside. --sigh--
A sweet and fun entry for the contest. Much good luck to you, girlfriend!
Comment Written 30-May-2019
Comment from Sasha
This is a stunning love poem and touched my heart. It is a great entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. Love is not a subject I am very comfortable writing about.
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This is a stunning love poem and touched my heart. It is a great entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. Love is not a subject I am very comfortable writing about.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful angle to a love poem, O Lady of the North -- just wonderful! :) Strength is found there on the knees.... especially when it is not just for personal reasons! ;) Thank you for the 'happy ending' love sonnet that has a great message for all young women! ;) Yvette
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What a wonderful angle to a love poem, O Lady of the North -- just wonderful! :) Strength is found there on the knees.... especially when it is not just for personal reasons! ;) Thank you for the 'happy ending' love sonnet that has a great message for all young women! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 30-May-2019
Comment from Kamisah Karim
A very romantic piece.Love the way you wrote of how she longed to make this special man hers.You are a romantic.
Good luck in the contest.Thank you for sharing.
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A very romantic piece.Love the way you wrote of how she longed to make this special man hers.You are a romantic.
Good luck in the contest.Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 30-May-2019
