Selfless Love
My parents gift18 total reviews
Comment from krystal rae
"Unconditional love never expires". Awesome! I really enjoyed your poem. I found It "soothing" If that makes sense. Thanks for the read I really enjoyed it.... I'm sorry that I'm new to this and I guess I'm not the "reviewer" type. Apparently, I have to be...Thanks again!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
"Unconditional love never expires". Awesome! I really enjoyed your poem. I found It "soothing" If that makes sense. Thanks for the read I really enjoyed it.... I'm sorry that I'm new to this and I guess I'm not the "reviewer" type. Apparently, I have to be...Thanks again!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Many thanks and you don't have to be it is your choice, I like to read other writing as it helps me with all the different forms, as yours (which I kept to read and gain from it****kahpot
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, I gave you your 4th vote.
Your poem stood out for me ..every baby should be wanted , loved and protected exactly how you imagined your parents must have felt about you.
I love how you formulated your thoughts .. every verse describes an important moment in the life of the newborn as for his/her parents.
We are the product of our experiences and if a child grows up in a loving , caring protective environment it's most likely that they in return will show the same love, warmth and protection to their offspring.
I think your poem is full of beautiful sentiments worthy to win the contest .
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
Ciao mystery poet, I gave you your 4th vote.
Your poem stood out for me ..every baby should be wanted , loved and protected exactly how you imagined your parents must have felt about you.
I love how you formulated your thoughts .. every verse describes an important moment in the life of the newborn as for his/her parents.
We are the product of our experiences and if a child grows up in a loving , caring protective environment it's most likely that they in return will show the same love, warmth and protection to their offspring.
I think your poem is full of beautiful sentiments worthy to win the contest .
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Kids and parents may not always have the best relationship but in the end they are always our parents. I have always said that I was their perfect kid, that's why they stopped after me. My brother and sister always fight me on it but I know the truth. lol
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
Kids and parents may not always have the best relationship but in the end they are always our parents. I have always said that I was their perfect kid, that's why they stopped after me. My brother and sister always fight me on it but I know the truth. lol
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you vey much
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A beautiful poem portraying so much love from and to your parents. How meaningful it is when that nurturing love is recognized and you do it so well. Good luck with the contest. I loved your poem.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
A beautiful poem portraying so much love from and to your parents. How meaningful it is when that nurturing love is recognized and you do it so well. Good luck with the contest. I loved your poem.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Patty Palmer
I enjoyed the way you looked at love through the eyes from your birth to two parents that loved you. How you felt that love all the time without any pause. Beautiful! We adopted our 3 children and I hope this is how they felt when they came to us.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
I enjoyed the way you looked at love through the eyes from your birth to two parents that loved you. How you felt that love all the time without any pause. Beautiful! We adopted our 3 children and I hope this is how they felt when they came to us.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm sure your parents would absolutely love this wonderful tribute to them and the love they gave you. It's lovely, author. This was a tricky contest poem, with strict rhyme guidelines. I had to go back and check them out, and you have succeeded perfectly. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
I'm sure your parents would absolutely love this wonderful tribute to them and the love they gave you. It's lovely, author. This was a tricky contest poem, with strict rhyme guidelines. I had to go back and check them out, and you have succeeded perfectly. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from WryWriter
Wow! This poem is amazing! If television and movies showed these kinds of works, how much better the world would be in a generation! This is beyond beautiful words. Wish I had a hundred star to give it!
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
Wow! This poem is amazing! If television and movies showed these kinds of works, how much better the world would be in a generation! This is beyond beautiful words. Wish I had a hundred star to give it!
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Your poem, "Selfless Love", and your picture are a perfect match! It is wonderful to read about your love and understanding of your parent's gift to you. Its unconditional nature is most admirable and excellent.
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
Dear Author,
Your poem, "Selfless Love", and your picture are a perfect match! It is wonderful to read about your love and understanding of your parent's gift to you. Its unconditional nature is most admirable and excellent.
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from dragonpoet
Good loving parents are as much of a miracle as the baby. Selfless love is taught and carried from generation to generation. It helps build a person's confidence.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
Good loving parents are as much of a miracle as the baby. Selfless love is taught and carried from generation to generation. It helps build a person's confidence.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you very much
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Any time.
~dragonpoet
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Mystery Writer
I love birth poems. I mean this could be a Hallmark card with how gorgeous it is. There is wonder, and questioning, and fear too. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
Hello Mystery Writer
I love birth poems. I mean this could be a Hallmark card with how gorgeous it is. There is wonder, and questioning, and fear too. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you very much