Comment from angel of the quill

Excellent

words the only way to speak
as an answer i seek
yes dare must i try
if i can i don't wish to dry
not the tears i wish to shed
but the images in my head
i wonder why it happens this way
when i had a very bad day
the only way to ease it all
is when words come to call

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2007

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2007

thank you so much!! :-)

Comment from cecil

Excellent

Good poem.
Very free flowing read.
Pleasant structure for a nice presentation.
Made me want to help you to do all and then take you up on the dare!

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2007

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2007

hehehehe ;-)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

A CHALLENGE TO CHALLENGE!

Right and orderly is the art of expression as to how to write poetry and reach the readers the best possibly; I liked the endeavor and challenge.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2007

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2007

thanx much!! :-)

Comment from garnbev

Excellent

Wonderful write. The flow was smooth. It's composed well. Well chosen words are expressive. There was no SPAG. No typos. Nothing to change. I look forward to seeing you again.
Love,
Bev

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2007

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2007

thanx! :-)

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Shelley,

This is a nice poem. The flow is smooth. Your arrangement looked great.

The formatting was well done. The imagery was divine.

Very reflective, all thoughts are very well described, understandable and comprehensible.

There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2007

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2007

thank you lots :-)

Comment from Jer4Clarity

Excellent

Shellei,

Quite the marketeer you are...you pay well, write well and then tempt us all to review you...how about a picture or two so we know who to woo!

Jerry

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2007

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2007

oh there's a picture of me and ashelei somewhere in my portfolio hehehehe ;-)

reply by Jer4Clarity on 20-Sep-2007

Shellei

There is no "WHATEVER" in your marketing!

~(;) J

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2007

what
ev
er
;-)

Comment from jamdownjenny

Excellent

Hello shellei kae,
Thanks for sharing this innovative piece with us.
I thought it was fast paced, up tempo and actually got me moving in my chair,
So I challenge you, make this into a sort of dup poetry or rap. I dare you...
I enjoyed the read. Keep on writing and posting,
jamdownjenny

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2007

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2007

cool wil start workin on it thanx! :-)

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

you want to know the words of show
the show is in the words you know
what is known in the words that are shown
a vibrant ideology over blown
subsequently on the divers plane
the divers plane is subsequently insane
so here you are, and there you go
create a substantial wordy repose
for one and one make two
and two words of any kind might do
but if you open up a new book
you just may find the new cook
of words with an over pretentious look... John

keep it going....

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2007

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2007

words with an over pretentious look.... cool line, will ae to mull this one over lol

Comment from tony bronk

Excellent

Almost a six, dear! I read alot of poems, and hand out fives and sixes "only" to smooth flowing poems like yours! I enjoyed the light touch of erotica, and, as well, the sentiments. Very nice poem! thank you tony bronk

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2007

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2007

COOL!
thank you so much!

Comment from easyeverett

Excellent

Ok! That's my answer to this witty, creative poetic tryst down Shelleys wanton, needful path of desire and experimentation. You have my attention and you did it through a wonderful creative trip. easy

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006

hehehe
COOL!!
thanx lots! :-)