Challenge Me
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Comment from karenina
No better way to stir the muse than to open up to suggestions and swing from the stars! I've mentioned this before in reviews. My grandson (seven)--loves to take rides in the country. One day, while we were driving by a field overcome with Dandelions gone to seed, he exclaimed: "Ok. Look! A Field of wishes" What would be your take on that?
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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No better way to stir the muse than to open up to suggestions and swing from the stars! I've mentioned this before in reviews. My grandson (seven)--loves to take rides in the country. One day, while we were driving by a field overcome with Dandelions gone to seed, he exclaimed: "Ok. Look! A Field of wishes" What would be your take on that?
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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"a field of wishes" that sounds cool! thank you karenina :)
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Have fun with it!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading another poem that you've written. I like the honesty of this one, you really put yourself out there. It seems as though you have a large body of work, I'm not sure how someone could give you a challenge.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading another poem that you've written. I like the honesty of this one, you really put yourself out there. It seems as though you have a large body of work, I'm not sure how someone could give you a challenge.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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well, check out some of the poems in this book and see what others have given me :)
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a really good poem. I also think the presentation (one of your creative strengths) is thought-provoking. As far as the poem itself is concerned. I do think it is the beginning of a really good Country and Western song. As a challenge, you might want to consider something about drinking beer or riding a horse...maybe trucks. Exceptional work.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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This is a really good poem. I also think the presentation (one of your creative strengths) is thought-provoking. As far as the poem itself is concerned. I do think it is the beginning of a really good Country and Western song. As a challenge, you might want to consider something about drinking beer or riding a horse...maybe trucks. Exceptional work.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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beer and a truck.... got it! i can make a good one with those objects hehe thank you terry :)
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LOL, keep up the good work!
Comment from John Ciarmello
You are just beyond the (Never Never Land) of muse, my friend, "shelley kaye." I read this three times just to say I did, lol. Super enjoyable and right off the wall of expression. I'm a super fan.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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You are just beyond the (Never Never Land) of muse, my friend, "shelley kaye." I read this three times just to say I did, lol. Super enjoyable and right off the wall of expression. I'm a super fan.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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cool! thank you john :-)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your vividly descriptive, emotional, creative poem issues a sincere challenge to readers to challenge YOU as a poet who wants to relate well with other poets. Very expressive
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Your vividly descriptive, emotional, creative poem issues a sincere challenge to readers to challenge YOU as a poet who wants to relate well with other poets. Very expressive
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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thank you janice :)
Comment from irishauthorme
Love It! I accept. I will proceed with gusto to the next step in this challenge you propose. I promise you a good, honest, gutsy contest once I see the rules and perimeters, if there are any. I admire and respect a woman who stands up and speaks her mind and encourages others to do the same.
Here we go!
irish
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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Love It! I accept. I will proceed with gusto to the next step in this challenge you propose. I promise you a good, honest, gutsy contest once I see the rules and perimeters, if there are any. I admire and respect a woman who stands up and speaks her mind and encourages others to do the same.
Here we go!
irish
Comment Written 08-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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thanx iris! :)
Comment from richard7
wicked and bold two sides of a sad and happy tale the sun always shiines when it rains and after too.
That is such a refined blend of little words it is to paint on the wall!
Very deserving of the ribbons involved!
Don't wish to ramble on, it is a delight to read, love the naughty daring laugh!
Only have 5's, bummer eh!
:-)
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2010
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wicked and bold two sides of a sad and happy tale the sun always shiines when it rains and after too.
That is such a refined blend of little words it is to paint on the wall!
Very deserving of the ribbons involved!
Don't wish to ramble on, it is a delight to read, love the naughty daring laugh!
Only have 5's, bummer eh!
:-)
Comment Written 20-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2010
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i'm a little angel ;-)
Comment from Valkarie
Interesting piece of temptation from a Scorpion...you seem to dare people to dare and tempt, them into a corner? The trouble is, what will happen to them when you have them backed up in that corner, I don't know. I think though you may have met your match with another Scorpion who has a deadly sting and a very devious way of dealing with things in this world>>>Ha Ha Ha. Good interesting piece.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Interesting piece of temptation from a Scorpion...you seem to dare people to dare and tempt, them into a corner? The trouble is, what will happen to them when you have them backed up in that corner, I don't know. I think though you may have met your match with another Scorpion who has a deadly sting and a very devious way of dealing with things in this world>>>Ha Ha Ha. Good interesting piece.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 25-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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muwahahahahaha ;-)
Comment from Lex82103
I read this once and I really liked it. I read it again and I saw that smile, cry, laugh and why were at the end of each line in the second paragaph. Then you used them again in the end of other paragraphs (Like: help me help you smile) I thought that was creative, but don't listen to me, because I'm not even in high school and I just thought I would say that because I really liked it and I would've never come up with it. You're very creative, just like you said. I'm not very creative. you're an excellant writer.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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I read this once and I really liked it. I read it again and I saw that smile, cry, laugh and why were at the end of each line in the second paragaph. Then you used them again in the end of other paragraphs (Like: help me help you smile) I thought that was creative, but don't listen to me, because I'm not even in high school and I just thought I would say that because I really liked it and I would've never come up with it. You're very creative, just like you said. I'm not very creative. you're an excellant writer.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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cool! thank you so much! :-)
Comment from dip-a-dee-do
I like this..
Like you said..This is your book and that is why..
I think you were concise and expressed yourself quite well..
Very good write..
Donna
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2007
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I like this..
Like you said..This is your book and that is why..
I think you were concise and expressed yourself quite well..
Very good write..
Donna
Comment Written 22-Sep-2007
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2007
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cool
thanx lots :-)
