Family Ties Volume two.
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "This Is The Way We Ought To Be."Second book Of Series.
3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, This Is The Way We Ought To Be, has the right set up and pretty much schedules the entire year for love-making. Remember to eat.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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This 5-7-5, This Is The Way We Ought To Be, has the right set up and pretty much schedules the entire year for love-making. Remember to eat.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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HELLO BILL: Thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem. As usual, you are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Earl Corp
Instead of just a year in Heaven, it should be eternity or forever. In my opinion this poem is good enough to be a contest entry. A 5-7-5 poem that makes sense is a rare thing, and you pulled it off. Nice job.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Instead of just a year in Heaven, it should be eternity or forever. In my opinion this poem is good enough to be a contest entry. A 5-7-5 poem that makes sense is a rare thing, and you pulled it off. Nice job.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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HELLO EARL: Again, I thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem. As usual. You are appreciated. You always give me wholesome encouraging reviews. Again, thank you. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Sandra Montanino
In so few words, you tell a story about a year of love. If you are in a contest, this is a good entry. I see you are ranked very high at #12 as a scriptwriter. That's terrific. It's hard to do both well. Good Job.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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In so few words, you tell a story about a year of love. If you are in a contest, this is a good entry. I see you are ranked very high at #12 as a scriptwriter. That's terrific. It's hard to do both well. Good Job.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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HELLO SANDRA: Thank you for viewing and complimenting on my poem. I try hard to do good wholesome work where ever I write. My readers are counting on me. As one of my readers, you are appreciated. God bless you: Cordially: rhonnie69.
