Family Ties Volume two.
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Hubby."Second book Of Series.
3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Hubby, seems to be drawing on the original sin story of Adam and Eve. That works in with the addition reminder that there will always be temptation, but also a way to avoid it. Nice.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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This poem, Hubby, seems to be drawing on the original sin story of Adam and Eve. That works in with the addition reminder that there will always be temptation, but also a way to avoid it. Nice.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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HELLO BILL: Thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem. As usual, you are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from patcelaw
We have all been met with temptation and that is not a sin, the sin comes when we yield to temptation. Nicely worded poem with a good message.
Patricia
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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We have all been met with temptation and that is not a sin, the sin comes when we yield to temptation. Nicely worded poem with a good message.
Patricia
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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HELLO PATCELAW: Thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem. As usual. you are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from kiwijenny
It's like this..I bought a pill that turned sugar into this vile taste...so you of course wouldn't eat it...but I threw away the pills...I wanted a little sweetness now and again...lol
We know but temptation is cunning
God bless
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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It's like this..I bought a pill that turned sugar into this vile taste...so you of course wouldn't eat it...but I threw away the pills...I wanted a little sweetness now and again...lol
We know but temptation is cunning
God bless
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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HELLO JENNY: Thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem. As usual. you are appreciated. God bless you, Cordially: rhonnie69.
