Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a chilling write and what happened to this snow globe, it looks full of horror! You fulfilled the brief here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019

Horror happens in the most unsuspecting places;^) Thanks for the review, Dolly!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

An excellent entry in this horror 5/7/5 poetry contes. There have been a lot of murders on these poor defenceless little ones of late, this snow globe reflection poem is a good one, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019

Thank you, Roy...

Comment from moonsunrise

Excellent

Your poem sent chills down my spine. The snow globe image you selected is quite eerie.
Very well written.
Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019

Thanks. Moon!

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hi :)
This is proper horror!
I love the internal rhyme in both lines 2 & 3.
Fantastic imagery.
Great presentation.
Good Luck in the voting booth, not that I think you need it!
Best wishes, Debra



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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019

Thank you, Debra!