Snow Globe
5-7-5 horror contest34 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
Interesting comments on the subject matter and nicely constructe, drives one to want more details about the subject matter and details on the girl mentioned if true. Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you and the missing girl mentioned.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Interesting comments on the subject matter and nicely constructe, drives one to want more details about the subject matter and details on the girl mentioned if true. Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you and the missing girl mentioned.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Descriptive and indeed could well be a horrible, scary situation for parents to be locked into: a missing child with bloody footprints found. Tells a complete, albeit, not so pleasant story.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Descriptive and indeed could well be a horrible, scary situation for parents to be locked into: a missing child with bloody footprints found. Tells a complete, albeit, not so pleasant story.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Brett!
Comment from Cedar
Hello Chip: Your short 5-7-5 says so much about a horrible situation that is running rampant all around the world, especially here in the States. I don't know the exact number each year, but I imagine it would be staggering.
Congratulations on a great win...Bill
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Hello Chip: Your short 5-7-5 says so much about a horrible situation that is running rampant all around the world, especially here in the States. I don't know the exact number each year, but I imagine it would be staggering.
Congratulations on a great win...Bill
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the generous rating, Cedar!
Comment from 24chas
Not sure how I missed this one until now, but this was great, Chip. A well deserved win in the contest. It had a whole story in just a few words. Nice job.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Not sure how I missed this one until now, but this was great, Chip. A well deserved win in the contest. It had a whole story in just a few words. Nice job.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thanks, 24, I appreciate it!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Snow Globe," is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, This is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to reading and reviewing your next post.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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"Snow Globe," is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, This is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to reading and reviewing your next post.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Many thanks, Duchess!
Chip Kuzborski, you're more than welcome.
Take care and God bless,
the Duchess :))) :)))
Comment from Heather Knight
I love snow globes, but I might change my mind after reading this...
You've managed to tell a whole story in just a few words.
Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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I love snow globes, but I might change my mind after reading this...
You've managed to tell a whole story in just a few words.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
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Ha, thank you, Maria Jose!
Comment from susand3022
This was pretty creepy Chip, I mean really... tiny red footprints... missing girl, snow... forsaken... shaken, all of these words provoke the worst images that a mother like myself can possibly imagine...
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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This was pretty creepy Chip, I mean really... tiny red footprints... missing girl, snow... forsaken... shaken, all of these words provoke the worst images that a mother like myself can possibly imagine...
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Then I did my job- thanks, Susan!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this moving
5-7-5 on a very timely, SAD subject. In the United States, 800,000 children are reported missing yearly, 2,000 DAILY! No wonder your entry won!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this moving
5-7-5 on a very timely, SAD subject. In the United States, 800,000 children are reported missing yearly, 2,000 DAILY! No wonder your entry won!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Janice, I appreciate the generous rating. Those statistics are staggering.
Comment from livelylinda
I read this poem 5 times and the hairs are still standing up on the back of my neck. This is genius, author! Should be a contest winner. livelylinda
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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I read this poem 5 times and the hairs are still standing up on the back of my neck. This is genius, author! Should be a contest winner. livelylinda
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much, Linda!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry. Your syllable count is correct per line. You give readers much to think about with your few syllables. That is a good thing but the outcome of your poem not so much. The animated picture works well. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Good job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry. Your syllable count is correct per line. You give readers much to think about with your few syllables. That is a good thing but the outcome of your poem not so much. The animated picture works well. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Jan!
