Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this dialogue so much. I love your sense of humour put into the mouths of these two characters. I must read more; it is highly entertaining.

 Comment Written 05-May-2019

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reply by the author on 06-May-2019

Thank you, LisaMay

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Just love the conversation of two intellectual Giants, Pns and Ned, this is a beauty. It's similar in nature to Humpwhistles characters, with the great interpretation of regional language, you've done a super job with this story of the month entry, good luck, blessings, Roy ,

 Comment Written 03-May-2019

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reply by the author on 03-May-2019

Thank you, Roy, for the great review and any likeness to Lee.

reply by royowen on 04-May-2019

Good job,

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

Great story with a lot of humor about a real rocket scientist. I'm glad that guy weren't the mekanick. Misspllit on poipose. Carry on! Thanks fer sharing.
Bill

 Comment Written 03-May-2019

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reply by the author on 03-May-2019

Thanks, Bill, for giving this one a look. Bill

reply by Bill Pinder on 03-May-2019

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

This one has more give and take than the pharmacy did. Ned's interpretation of the English language is hilarious. You never used my suggestion if Scene at the ballpark. Having them meet at a golf course would be funny.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019

I don?t recall the ballpark or golf course suggestions, but they?re coming up.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Oh that Ned. I guess he might know maybe a little more about cars than I do so I'll give him a break/brake this time. I hope he keeps his bicyclette working in safe order!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

He has balance on a bicycle, if not anywhere else.

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

I really hate it when I make a great one-liner and no-one notices. I love these simple people (well, one's very simple) and thanks for my morning smile.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thanks, Judy, for the excellent review. I know what it?s like, too, to say funny stuff and get the glassy stare.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I might have missed some of these Ned and Pon's stories, I'll have to have a look. They are hilariously funny, how you work them all out to write down, I haven't a clue, but they come out brilliantly. I loved this one. Driving backwards, LOL! Well done, :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thank you, Sandra.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Another funny encounter between these cousins. Pons must really like his cousin, or else he'd hide from him in public.

I hope Ned doesn't get hurt riding backwards. He certainly has his own way of looking at things.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Ned, Ned, Ned. He can walk and chew gum anyway. Not at the same time, of course.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

They say that God protects babies and fools. Ned is a fool that needs 24/7 type of protection. I daresay that babies may not need as much protection as Ned. What a poor fool. Yet I kike him a lot. Really who does not love a fool? They make us laugh.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

I?m afraid Ned gets dumber all the time. I now fear I will need to become super stupid to keep him going.

reply by nomi338 on 05-Apr-2019

Good luck.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he, I just knew what was coming when the front tyres went on the rear axle! And you didn't disappoint! I love 'Pons' logic! A very entertaining write Bill, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thanks, Dolly, for giving this a look. Bill