Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

Hi, Bill! It's been a while, and to tell the truth, I am not sure if it's you or me who's been away more. This is a good offering on Pons and Ned, as are all I've read thus far. Thanks for the smile, Bill!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Thanks, Brenda, for giving this a look. Life has been demanding my time lately. In April now I'll have a new granddaughter to watch (we watch two now), in June a new high school graduate/ college-bound grandson (moving and whining), and in July a new knee (and four to six weeks of recovery). My wife fears she'll have two new babies to watch.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 12-Apr-2019

Sounds like you've got your hands full! I'm still working two jobs and juggling a semblance of a social schedule. Not a bunch of time for fanstory lately, I'm afraid, but I sneak in a bit while I can. Good luck to you, Bill!

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

This Ned and Pons adventure was kind of short. There is usully a lot more butchered words by NED which is what makes it funny. Not your best scene at .... contribution.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019

There were drugs involved, so that?s probably why it was substandard.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

You captured a rare moment that we all have encountered at sometime or another. Well thought out. Nicely written. Funny. The slang was a little difficult to understand. Good work.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019

I will have to edit Ned?s vernacular when I go to press. He has varied widely from scene to scene.

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Bill,

Wa ha ha ha! This one is really funny. Very well written, my friend. No revisions necessary, except a brain implant for Ned. Lol Thanks for the chuckle. Jan :-)

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

Thanks, HM. I?m not certain if he can get any dumber and breathe.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It's one of those conversations that you don't want in public but especially not with Ned - in public. He'll just put it in the most embarrassing way! Lol.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

By this time you would think Pons would visibly tremble whenever he saw Ned. : )

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was a really funny one, Bill. I actually laughed out loud at the end. I love these cats, they're funny. Nice job of writing and I can't wait for the next one.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

Thank you, Chas, for the nice review. Bill

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Oh, Bill, this is just too funny. I can just imagine those two left out with the public and imagine the reaction to them. Hilarious, so it is. All best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thanks, Ulla. I?ve been asked to write scripts about someone else. When I do all I hear is , ?Where?s Ned??

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

LOL, LOL, LOL, that is hilarious!!!!!! LOL. This has to be the funniest one yet, I nearly wet myself laughing! I think you should put a warning on these tales, tell everyone to put incontinent pants on! LOL :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Some folks thought it was a pit much, but Ned is a bit uncouth. Thanks for the great review, Sandra. Bill

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 05-Apr-2019

Really!! Have they not got a sense of humour? I thought it brilliant fun.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Ned is up to his usual stupidity. This is rather gross, no matter how cleverly it's punned. Leave it to Ned to forget how to poop. You have these Pons and Ned stories down. How about taking on a new idea? Show that you have some range. There's a script contest coming up, end of May, I believe. Why not give that a try?

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thanks, Judi. I may do that.

reply by judiverse on 05-Apr-2019

Spread your wings a bit. You have a handle on Pons and Ned, so why not try something different? judi

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

I think that Pons deserves an award for not abandoning Ned or pretending that they are not related. Many people that I know would definitely try to pretend that they do not know him, and are definitely not related in any way.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thanks, nomi, for giving this a look. Bill