World Peace
If only we had peace in our times.18 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Scripture tells us there will always be wars and rumors of wars. The only way it will be turned around is for God to send His Son to begin the time of tribulation.
Patricia
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Scripture tells us there will always be wars and rumors of wars. The only way it will be turned around is for God to send His Son to begin the time of tribulation.
Patricia
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Indeed. I remember the words from the Book of Revelation. We have heaped coals on our own heads; man in his selfishness has turned day into night. Thank you Patricia. God bless, Kay XX
Comment from June Sargent
This reminds me of John Lennon's song Imagine. Also Louis Armstrong's What a Wonderful World. If only we could live in peace. Nice entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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This reminds me of John Lennon's song Imagine. Also Louis Armstrong's What a Wonderful World. If only we could live in peace. Nice entry for the contest.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Hi June, Funny you should say that. I was watching a doco on John Lennon and his song Imagine (words by Yoko Ono) sparked my need to write a poem. Thank you sweet-pea. Love, Kay.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Share a Story in a Poem contest. You used great words with very loving sentiments I share too. love and blessings my friend. Best wishes in the contest!!!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Share a Story in a Poem contest. You used great words with very loving sentiments I share too. love and blessings my friend. Best wishes in the contest!!!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much Teri. John Lennon's song 'Imagine' came to mind when writing this. Love, Kay.
Comment from Sasha
Hello stranger, you have been missed. Sadly, I don't see any improvement in man that would lead to world peace. That doesn't mean I don't hope but just that I don't have that much faith in man to finally put his foot down and say, enough is enough. Lovely work with this one and a great entry for this contest. I sincerely wish you all the best too.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Hello stranger, you have been missed. Sadly, I don't see any improvement in man that would lead to world peace. That doesn't mean I don't hope but just that I don't have that much faith in man to finally put his foot down and say, enough is enough. Lovely work with this one and a great entry for this contest. I sincerely wish you all the best too.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Hello my friend. Yes, I have been away painting, back now. John Lennon's song 'Imagine inspired my poem. We are being led by darkness, and it is up to us to say 'enough is enough." Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed. Love, Kay.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good write, Aussie. I'd love to think it could be turned around, but it seems like it's never going to happen. People are too lazy and apathetic for the most part. But I love your sentiment. Good job.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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This was a good write, Aussie. I'd love to think it could be turned around, but it seems like it's never going to happen. People are too lazy and apathetic for the most part. But I love your sentiment. Good job.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Hello my friend and thank you for reading. Yes, men are too lazy to put a stop to their own destruction. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kace, I clicked on my pm fast...and click off..your name caught my eye and I clicked back on sweet girl...LOL
this has to have six my sweet friend...great rhythm and rhyme...and I love the world it would be if people would find love in their hearts...and we would have peace...I love your poem Sweetie Pie...and love this picture...very nicely written...Soooooooo glad to have you back...much love...Linda xxoo
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Hi Kace, I clicked on my pm fast...and click off..your name caught my eye and I clicked back on sweet girl...LOL
this has to have six my sweet friend...great rhythm and rhyme...and I love the world it would be if people would find love in their hearts...and we would have peace...I love your poem Sweetie Pie...and love this picture...very nicely written...Soooooooo glad to have you back...much love...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Hi there lindy Louie, John Lennon's song 'Imagine' inspired this poem. We need to work together for world peace. Thank you for your kind sentiments my dear friend. Hope you are well? Love, Kace.
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Hey You, it's a wonderful poem...and you are always welcome...I am doing well...just wish it would get warm here...sigh...have a wonderful weekend you...much love...xxoo
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Rest your weary eyes, then take the time to touch the morning. Love wanders through the early morning dew. Love, Kace.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with your words and I heard a lecture on radio four once and they deemed wars a necessary evil in our society, they readjust the boundaries and bring the peace back. There is much suffering in war, anger and hate. The ying and yang of life is sometimes too extreme, your poem is well rhymed and heartfelt, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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I so agree with your words and I heard a lecture on radio four once and they deemed wars a necessary evil in our society, they readjust the boundaries and bring the peace back. There is much suffering in war, anger and hate. The ying and yang of life is sometimes too extreme, your poem is well rhymed and heartfelt, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Hello Dolly! Thanks so much for dropping in. John Lennon's song 'Imagine' inspired me to write about world peace. Unfortunately, man has become too lazy over his own fate. He thinks now god is coming down to save him...god is out playing golf! Love, Kay.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Aussie,
Very nicely written, my friend. Both your verse and visual presentation are perfect. I like the quote in your image. Nothing for me to suggest you consider revising. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
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Hi Aussie,
Very nicely written, my friend. Both your verse and visual presentation are perfect. I like the quote in your image. Nothing for me to suggest you consider revising. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Hi Jan, Thanks for dropping in to read. John Lennon's song Imagine inspired me to write about World peace. Man is too lazy to get out of the way and say "enough is enough." Blessings, Kay.
