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Something to think about

Society...

4 total reviews 
Comment from prettybluebirds
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hi, Angie. I haven't been on this site much lately so I just noticed your writings. This one sure hits the nail on the head. I wish you the best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thanks Auntie. It was hard to limit it to 100 words.

    Love you
Comment from l.raven
Excellent
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Hi Johngie, one of my biggest complaints are these phones...
people no long talk to each other...texted...oh by the way uncle Bill passed away...I'll text you back and let you know when the wake is...HOW RUDE...people don't even look at each other when they go out to eat...the kids are on games machines...it's crazy...love your poem my sweet friend...and love your picture...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
    Thank you sweetie
reply by l.raven on 13-Feb-2019
    you are always so welcome...and I am so glad to see you writing...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Excellent
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Johngie, I totally get this thoughtfully composed 100 word Flash Fiction story - although fact not fiction. It echoes my thoughts exactly. Can you believe there have been studies done to express how harmful device use and social media is to society, especially the young and impressionable. Seriously, was that not obvious?! I am constantly rolling my eyes and shaking my head on it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and best of luck in the competition. ~DD

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
    Thank you for your kind words. It is totally fictional. Just had to limit it to 100 words.
Comment from rspoet
Excellent
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Hello Johngie,
This is an interesting post for the contest with some excellent insights and suggestions.
Your niece is very mature for her age.
There are many things effected by the lack of interaction in our new societies.
Wonderful picture choice, too.
Unfortunately, the contest is fiction, so I'm not sure if this excellent post will be accepted,
but best wishes to you and your niece.
Robert


 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
    Thank you for your kind words. Just had to limit it to 100 words.