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A Light in the Window

A tribute to a man of sight.

10 total reviews 
Comment from rtobaygo
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Good afternoon, Poetwatch

Very moving. Really liked the opening stanza. The tribute is fitting. From the words used one can tell how much he influenced your life and continues to do so even from the pearly gates.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Thanks Ray. Some day we also will go. Hope someone remembers.
Comment from aryr
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This was extremely well done Jose, I have been gone for a few days just hitting FS here and there. I was so shocked to read about Mr. Cahill, he was indeed an inspiration to all of us and will be sadly missed.You did this very well my friend, it was a wonderful tribute.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you Alie. The stars belong to Mike.
reply by aryr on 05-Feb-2019
    You are so welcome Jose, no the stars belong to you, it's was tragic regarding Mike, but you wrote the wonderful tribute
Comment from Sugarray77
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This Lanturne Chain is very well done and spot on. You followed the requirements perfectly and your memorial not to Michael was a perfect way to close. So well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you Melissa. It good but it needs to make a lantern. The last needs to be corrected.
Comment from country ranch writer
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I WAS SO SAD TO LEARN OF MIKEY'S DEMISE IT HAS BEEN QUITE A SHOCK TO ME I DON'T THINK I WILL EVER GET OVER IT HE WAS MY SHINING KNIGHT IN ARMOUR.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you Country. The stars belong to Mike.
reply by country ranch writer on 05-Feb-2019
    Smiles
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh, Jose - such a lovely tribute!! :) ;) And you did it in the Lanturne Chain ... how marvelous! :) And, from what I've learned of Michael in all the writes and communications today, he certainly would think it was marvelous too! :) ;) Love the way you actually linked the last to lanturnes -- great job! :) ;) Thanx for accepting and for sharing your wonderful creation! :) ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you Yvette, but it needs work to make a lantern. The last needs to be corrected..
Comment from Sally Law
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A fine tribute our own, Michael Cahill. We were just starting to interact when he went away. A fine writer, poet and friend. Thank you for this.
All my best,
Sal

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you Sally.
Comment from trimple
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Good evening, Poetwatch

This is a wonderfully written tribute to the talented and much loved, author and friend, Michael Cahill.

He will be sadly missed here on the site and I can't imagine how sad his sudden death must have affected his family and real life friends.

Truly lovely.

much love

tracey

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you trimple.
Comment from Christine C Autry
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I enjoyed your poem it was very good. I enjoyed the artwork it was good too. Thank you for your talent and thank you for putting down what you think on a daily basis don't worry about anything else.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you Christine. It needs work. I wrote it on the moment.
reply by Christine C Autry on 05-Feb-2019
    Your Welcome.
Comment from Cycler
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Beautifully said. So appropriate when inspired this way to follow through with the dedication like you did.
Great picture, wonderful message, great inspiration!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you Cycler. The stars belong to Mike.
Comment from patcelaw
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Poetwatch this is a simple tribute to Mike and I am sure he would be most pleased with the free verse and the wonderful flow of youur words. Blessings, Patricia

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you Patricia.