Comment from nomi338

Excellent

I knew it Ned ain't nearly as dumbe as he at first appeared. Just one conversation and he has made ten bucks for himself. Maybe Pons is the dummy. LOL.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019

You may be right.

Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

You have to wait til I quit laughing to get a review. Oh my, these guys are the highlight of my day - so that tells you a little about my life! You are a genius at this. I never laugh, not at sitcoms, not at , but these bits are priceless. Of course your give your pig orange soda!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019

Thank you, Sherry. You?re great for my ego.

reply by Miss Sherry on 02-Feb-2019

You are great for my tendency for depression!!

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Yay Ned and Pons are back. Funny I owned both a Dodge Dart and a 351 Windsor in a Mercury Marquee. Are you trying to get a Ned and Pons book? You've posted quite a few that i've read. Nice job.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019

Thanks, Earl. Yes I hope to have them out this year.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh, Bill, I so needed that smile from Ned and Pons this morning -- great humor and splendid writing with your interjections of Pons 'pauses' and 'stares' at perfect times to enhance the comedic impact....great job! ;) ;) Thank you for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019

Thanks, Yvette.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Ned sounds like a redneck, so I can imagine what his house and lawn look like, with saplings growing through piston shafts and the pig doing the yard work. Funny about the pig liking orange soda pop. (That sounds Southern.) I don't think Ned is cut out to work in a service station. Funniest bit was the break and brakes confusion on Ned's part. Fun post. judi

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019

Thanks, Judi. Ned?s neck is so red it?s RAD.

reply by judiverse on 01-Feb-2019

"Rad" it is. You're welcome. judi

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A unique write and the misunderstanding and talking at cross purposes always reminds me of my grandma who was deaf and she would give us an answer to a question she thought we had asked! A clever a fun write Bill, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019

Thanks, Dolly

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

What brings you down here to the gas station. - probably need a question mark in here.

Another witty reposte fro the boys here. These ar
e good fun.

All the best
G

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019

Thanks, G

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Ned is quite the character, but I like his logic. He ended up with fifty dollars. lol. I laughed at the sapling growing up through the piston shafts.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019

Thanks, Yvonne

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

LOL! Love it. I want Ned to handle my money. I'll a twenty percent profit on every transaction. I like his engine case by the tree with suckers growing through it. He could charge people to see that. And his pig. He must have a lot of stuff people would love to take a picture of. :)

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019

Thanks, Phyllis. I imagine crime scene tape as a make-shift fence.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Poor Pons Sometimes one wonders how he puts up with Ned but gotta admire his loyalty and understanding. Well, I guess he doesn't quite understand him. But then Ned surprises me at the things he does understand. That pig shouldn't drink orange soda!

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 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019

Thanks, lyenochka. Someone?s got to drink that soda.