Short
Viewing comments for Chapter 87 "Fish Food"Shorter stories
15 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'll never eat another shrimp again! That was disgusting!!!! Lol, this is a typical Bill short flash. You have a warped sense of humour, my friend, and I love it!! Well done. I'm determined to finish these! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
  |
I'll never eat another shrimp again! That was disgusting!!!! Lol, this is a typical Bill short flash. You have a warped sense of humour, my friend, and I love it!! Well done. I'm determined to finish these! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
-
I have eaten grubs and they are best swallowed with a lot of fluids.
Comment from nomi338
Obviously she did not notice the smoke coming from your pants which no doubt had already caught fire. As to your punishment, you got exactly what you deserved. Shame on you for telling one so naïve that she believed your evil lies.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
|
Obviously she did not notice the smoke coming from your pants which no doubt had already caught fire. As to your punishment, you got exactly what you deserved. Shame on you for telling one so naïve that she believed your evil lies.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
-
This is fiction, but it's from some I thought years ago. I was making Rice-aroni once and used baby shrimp. They look like grubs in the can. I thought it might be funny to switch them with grubs. Did I mention I was married once before.
-
I figured that much, pulling a stunt like you did does not contribute to the health of a union.
Comment from Teri7
This was a very well written short story about Janice and the grubs. I can only imagine the face when the baby shrimp or grubs on the plate. I could feel sick to. It really funny what we could possible eat and not even know it until after way! Great job as always! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
|
This was a very well written short story about Janice and the grubs. I can only imagine the face when the baby shrimp or grubs on the plate. I could feel sick to. It really funny what we could possible eat and not even know it until after way! Great job as always! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
-
Thanks, Teri
Comment from Earl Corp
Good for her, giving you the beating you received. No matter how you fry them, grubs ain't shrimp.This story was different from your usual poetry posts. When are you getting back to bakers dozen?
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
|
Good for her, giving you the beating you received. No matter how you fry them, grubs ain't shrimp.This story was different from your usual poetry posts. When are you getting back to bakers dozen?
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
-
I have three novels for which to get back. Pale Sisters, Baker's Dozen, and I think I'll expand on a short story, Final Exercise.
Comment from Teresa Alford
Gross. I say that in a good way. Funny, witty and clever. I just feel like I say the same thing over and over again to you, but I do love your stories and such and they are always clever, witty, and funny. Smiles!! TA ";~)
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
|
Gross. I say that in a good way. Funny, witty and clever. I just feel like I say the same thing over and over again to you, but I do love your stories and such and they are always clever, witty, and funny. Smiles!! TA ";~)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
-
You say the nicest things. You can copy and paste that on each response if you like. I may even print it out for inspiration.
Comment from damommy
A good spanking was well deserved. But I can't imagine anyone falling for that and going so far as to try eating them. That's funny. I think the beating was worth it. lol
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
|
A good spanking was well deserved. But I can't imagine anyone falling for that and going so far as to try eating them. That's funny. I think the beating was worth it. lol
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
-
That would worth it; wouldn't it?
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh my goodness -- that's hilarious....doesn't say much for poor Janice, but hilarious just the same! :) A well-written short story with a wonderful light and welcome humor .... you should have a book of these for folks that might not like to read much at a time, but could start their day out with a smile from a short story like this one. :) Just a thought... Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
|
Oh my goodness -- that's hilarious....doesn't say much for poor Janice, but hilarious just the same! :) A well-written short story with a wonderful light and welcome humor .... you should have a book of these for folks that might not like to read much at a time, but could start their day out with a smile from a short story like this one. :) Just a thought... Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
-
Thanks, Yvette. I?m going through my short stories now to separate for mild and intense.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Oh, my gosh this one certainly brings back memories of life with four brothers.
Evil wretches they were and ninjas at all forms of assassination-Well you know what I mean.
I enjoyed the topic and the short tale has the elements required-especially the twist in the tale ending.
Thoroughly enjoyable.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
|
Oh, my gosh this one certainly brings back memories of life with four brothers.
Evil wretches they were and ninjas at all forms of assassination-Well you know what I mean.
I enjoyed the topic and the short tale has the elements required-especially the twist in the tale ending.
Thoroughly enjoyable.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
-
Thank you, Shirley
Comment from WryWriter
This reminds me of someone who said hot sauce wasn't really hot, ate some, then kissed me. I didn't think it was funny, but this story of yours is! Grubs around here bite. There is a tree worm that looks like grubs that is used for fishing, but I can't spell it. Sounds like 'Ka tog a' worms. You can freeze them in a milk carton and when thawed, they start wiggling around again. Poor Janice! I say poor because I am not going to try her delicacy to find out if it tastes rotten. A suggestion below:
Not technically wrong and probably more sarcastic sounding the way it is, but suggestion anyway:
"Janice. Worms are like...."
Janice! Worms.... or Janice, worms are like....
Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
|
This reminds me of someone who said hot sauce wasn't really hot, ate some, then kissed me. I didn't think it was funny, but this story of yours is! Grubs around here bite. There is a tree worm that looks like grubs that is used for fishing, but I can't spell it. Sounds like 'Ka tog a' worms. You can freeze them in a milk carton and when thawed, they start wiggling around again. Poor Janice! I say poor because I am not going to try her delicacy to find out if it tastes rotten. A suggestion below:
Not technically wrong and probably more sarcastic sounding the way it is, but suggestion anyway:
"Janice. Worms are like...."
Janice! Worms.... or Janice, worms are like....
Enjoyed!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
-
Thanks, WW, for giving this a look.
Comment from Gloria ....
HAHA, you tricker. I can imagine that Janice wouldn't've been too happy to learn those grubs weren't really yummy like shrimp after all.
I'm glad to know this is fiction, yes?
HA good one.
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
|
HAHA, you tricker. I can imagine that Janice wouldn't've been too happy to learn those grubs weren't really yummy like shrimp after all.
I'm glad to know this is fiction, yes?
HA good one.
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
-
Thanks, Gloria.
