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Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "Scene at a Carnival Midway"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from susand3022
Hi,
Recently I was told that my reviewing basically sucks. So this week,
this is my review. I'm taking a survey... Would you rather:
A: Have a true review
B: Have a certain 5-star generic review
Choose wisely and be sure of your choice so I can save myself the
needless time and tears over those who don't want to hear them.
I'll make a list.
And remember... LEARNING IS EARNING!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Hi,
Recently I was told that my reviewing basically sucks. So this week,
this is my review. I'm taking a survey... Would you rather:
A: Have a true review
B: Have a certain 5-star generic review
Choose wisely and be sure of your choice so I can save myself the
needless time and tears over those who don't want to hear them.
I'll make a list.
And remember... LEARNING IS EARNING!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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A. I?m willing to take it on the chin if anything you?ve got is authentic and not just your nonspecific opinion.
B. I think, of course, that my stuff is great. So you must defend your review.
C. Typically, reviewers who say things you are saying (and there are a few) think their shit doesn?t stink and that I and others need your input. If you are a publishing editor I would, of course, want your guidance. If not, I?m sure I?ll survive not getting your input.
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Hi Bill, I'm pretty sure that I already made my point earlier. Just so you get it though, you aren't worth my time.
Comment from judiverse
Can't take Ned anywhere. At least only Pons is listening to him, and he understands what he's dealing with. It's funny that Ned mentions the people who said "Look at that clown," but Ned couldn't find any clowns. The elephant jokes were funny more or less. I'd love to know what Ned looks like. There seems to be an unlimited number of occasions for Ned to offer his insights. Very entertaining. judi
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Can't take Ned anywhere. At least only Pons is listening to him, and he understands what he's dealing with. It's funny that Ned mentions the people who said "Look at that clown," but Ned couldn't find any clowns. The elephant jokes were funny more or less. I'd love to know what Ned looks like. There seems to be an unlimited number of occasions for Ned to offer his insights. Very entertaining. judi
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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I have two scenes where I used shots of a pair of men whom I would depict as Pons and Ned. ONne was Scene at a Red Lobster. It's in my portfolio.
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You need to find two guys who could perform this stuff. A theatre I know sometimes holds a talent show. If there are any places that have them near you, find yourself two guys and see how it goes. judi
Comment from WryWriter
These two characters are a hoot! You could write a whole book on these two. How about, "Short Stories to Short Your Brain." Maybe, "Make Sure You're Buzzed Before Ya Browse." Sunday comics or a comic book. They make the perfect theatrical characters like Ralph and Ed.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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These two characters are a hoot! You could write a whole book on these two. How about, "Short Stories to Short Your Brain." Maybe, "Make Sure You're Buzzed Before Ya Browse." Sunday comics or a comic book. They make the perfect theatrical characters like Ralph and Ed.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Thanks, WW
Comment from nomi338
That should be very easy to accomplish, just take Ned to the nearest mirror an ta da! Ned is a wonderful case of whatever happened with the guy who was born without a brain. Ned's nickname should be scarecrow.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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That should be very easy to accomplish, just take Ned to the nearest mirror an ta da! Ned is a wonderful case of whatever happened with the guy who was born without a brain. Ned's nickname should be scarecrow.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Reviewers are beginning to comment that Ned is becoming a bit scary.
Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHA! Best laughs:
1)"Baby elephants?"
2)"That's as plain as the nose on yer face." (Ned might be smarter than we know... Nah! HAHAHAHAHA!)
3)"My nose funny, Pons?" (Timing is everything with comedy, but then you obviously know that!)
...and following the diarrhea remark...
4) "Maybe ten TONS..." EEeeeeeYUCK> LOL)
Grinning too hard again... :)) (Face hurts. LOL)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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HAHAHAHA! Best laughs:
1)"Baby elephants?"
2)"That's as plain as the nose on yer face." (Ned might be smarter than we know... Nah! HAHAHAHAHA!)
3)"My nose funny, Pons?" (Timing is everything with comedy, but then you obviously know that!)
...and following the diarrhea remark...
4) "Maybe ten TONS..." EEeeeeeYUCK> LOL)
Grinning too hard again... :)) (Face hurts. LOL)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Hope I don?t hurt you, Dawn. Thank you for the great review. Bill
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LOL. Back soon to read more of these two (I hope).
Comment from Sugarray77
What is worse than an elephant with a nose bleed? A giraffe with a sore throat. Hahaha. I love your humorous write and think this type and style fit perfectly with Pons and Ned. So well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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What is worse than an elephant with a nose bleed? A giraffe with a sore throat. Hahaha. I love your humorous write and think this type and style fit perfectly with Pons and Ned. So well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Melissa.
Comment from Teri7
This is another very cute and funny script with Ned and Pons. I do not know how you come up with all those cute and funny ideas.I enjoyed reading and reviewing this! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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This is another very cute and funny script with Ned and Pons. I do not know how you come up with all those cute and funny ideas.I enjoyed reading and reviewing this! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, Ned, please don't spend too much time looking....unless you try the Hall of Mirrors! :) ;) :) Great back-and-forth as always! :) :) Thanx for the smiles, Sir Bill, you know how to start the first week back to school on the right foot! :) :) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Oh, Ned, please don't spend too much time looking....unless you try the Hall of Mirrors! :) ;) :) Great back-and-forth as always! :) :) Thanx for the smiles, Sir Bill, you know how to start the first week back to school on the right foot! :) :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Yvette. That Ned is a caution.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahahaha...
Poor, poor Ned. I'm really starting to worry about him, Bill.
Ya wanna know what I think?
I think Ned's an alien clone of the real Ned.
Bear with me for just a moment here, Bill...
What individual who is as superstitious as Ned supposedly is goes out of his or her way lookin' for clowns? Most all of 'em I know suffer from Coulrophobia, or the irrational fear of clowns.
So, it just stands to reason that Ned isn't really Ned at all, but a duplicate created in some sorta genetic laboratory on some alien mothership.
Cool how I figured that out, right? Sherlock Holmes ain't got nothin' on me.
Heh-heh-heh...
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Hahahaha...
Poor, poor Ned. I'm really starting to worry about him, Bill.
Ya wanna know what I think?
I think Ned's an alien clone of the real Ned.
Bear with me for just a moment here, Bill...
What individual who is as superstitious as Ned supposedly is goes out of his or her way lookin' for clowns? Most all of 'em I know suffer from Coulrophobia, or the irrational fear of clowns.
So, it just stands to reason that Ned isn't really Ned at all, but a duplicate created in some sorta genetic laboratory on some alien mothership.
Cool how I figured that out, right? Sherlock Holmes ain't got nothin' on me.
Heh-heh-heh...
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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I somehow feel Ned would be scrubbed from the clone list before that got out of hand. Thanks for investigating that though.
Comment from Earl Corp
I don't know if it's a good idea for Ned and Pons to be on a circus midway, the freak show might grab them up. Well at least Ned anyway. Very Nice job.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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I don't know if it's a good idea for Ned and Pons to be on a circus midway, the freak show might grab them up. Well at least Ned anyway. Very Nice job.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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That's a thought. Could be a scene. Do they still have freak shows?
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I think so I escaped from one. I was the dumbest man alive.
