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Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "Scene at a Mock Interview"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from brenda faye curtis
I like this one, Bill, a little more detailed than the last one I read (I think it was the scene at the post office). It's when they're detailed that the Ned and Pons scenes are the most entertaining.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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I like this one, Bill, a little more detailed than the last one I read (I think it was the scene at the post office). It's when they're detailed that the Ned and Pons scenes are the most entertaining.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Brenda
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from judiverse
Reality doesn't come easily for Ned. Thinking he's already got a job. Ned's smart asking Pons if he has identification. Not a bad idea, unless they're in California. Fun bit about Pons trying to simulate an interview by asking Ned to knock on the door so he can be admitted for his interview. That seems too much for Ned to handle. Funny Ned asking what was in his resume. Great fun, but I don't see Ned getting many job offers, unless he likes to work outdoors. judi
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Reality doesn't come easily for Ned. Thinking he's already got a job. Ned's smart asking Pons if he has identification. Not a bad idea, unless they're in California. Fun bit about Pons trying to simulate an interview by asking Ned to knock on the door so he can be admitted for his interview. That seems too much for Ned to handle. Funny Ned asking what was in his resume. Great fun, but I don't see Ned getting many job offers, unless he likes to work outdoors. judi
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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He works for me.
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He'd be entertaining to have around. judi
Comment from susand3022
Hi,
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this is my review. I'm taking a survey... Would you rather:
A: Have a true review
B: Have a certain 5-star generic review
Choose wisely and be sure of your choice so I can save myself the
needless time and tears over those who don't want to hear them.
I'll make a list.
And remember... LEARNING IS EARNING!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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Hi,
Recently I was told that my reviewing basically sucks. So this week,
this is my review. I'm taking a survey... Would you rather:
A: Have a true review
B: Have a certain 5-star generic review
Choose wisely and be sure of your choice so I can save myself the
needless time and tears over those who don't want to hear them.
I'll make a list.
And remember... LEARNING IS EARNING!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
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A. I?m willing to take it on the chin if anything you?ve got is authentic and not just your nonspecific opinion.
B. I think, of course, that my stuff is great. So you must defend your review.
C. Typically, reviewers who say things you are saying (and there are a few) think their shit doesn?t stink and that I and others need your input. If you are a publishing editor I would, of course, want your guidance. If not, I?m sure I?ll survive not getting your input.
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Hi Bill, I really hope this is the last time I have to tell you this... well, you know already.
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I think you should review my stuff. I need to brought down a peg.
Comment from nomi338
Ned impossibly gets more stupid by the moment. To top it all off, he is funny as hell. When said that Pons was Clara Voyant I nearly died. I haven't laughed that hard in a very long time. Thank you big time for the big belly laugh, and please belive me I have a big belly
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Ned impossibly gets more stupid by the moment. To top it all off, he is funny as hell. When said that Pons was Clara Voyant I nearly died. I haven't laughed that hard in a very long time. Thank you big time for the big belly laugh, and please belive me I have a big belly
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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So happy the boys can make folks laugh. Thanks, nomi, for the positive review. Bill
Comment from lyenochka
Poor Pons! He's so helpful but I'm not sure that he should be trying to help Ned - might get him into more trouble if he gets the job. What did he mean by "Just the one?" Did only one of the jobs give him pay? I'm guessing the long list of people in the babysitting job was just one person.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Poor Pons! He's so helpful but I'm not sure that he should be trying to help Ned - might get him into more trouble if he gets the job. What did he mean by "Just the one?" Did only one of the jobs give him pay? I'm guessing the long list of people in the babysitting job was just one person.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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When Pons asked, ?Did they pay you??, he meant the last one mentioned. Ned thought he meant the whole list of possessives.
Comment from Teri7
Bill, You are really good at these scripts. This one is just too cute and funny. You used very cute dialogue and very good imagery from the picture you used and your words. I had to laugh at this one! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Bill, You are really good at these scripts. This one is just too cute and funny. You used very cute dialogue and very good imagery from the picture you used and your words. I had to laugh at this one! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Earl Corp
Ned and Pons are quickly becoming my favorite characters on Fanstory. I loved this part, Pons is in the bathroom, Ned. All a big joke. I'll go get him. Very nice job.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Ned and Pons are quickly becoming my favorite characters on Fanstory. I loved this part, Pons is in the bathroom, Ned. All a big joke. I'll go get him. Very nice job.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Earl
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, good heavens...these two are just hilarious....and just when I think I can predict what'll come next, there you go, Sir Bill, and throwing in Clara!! :) ;) As always thanx for the smiles and the lighthearted writes....actually makes your readers start to hear 'Ned and Pons Opportunities' in everyday conversations!! :) :) Be sure to pop back in and correct the title from "an" to 'a'. :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Oh, good heavens...these two are just hilarious....and just when I think I can predict what'll come next, there you go, Sir Bill, and throwing in Clara!! :) ;) As always thanx for the smiles and the lighthearted writes....actually makes your readers start to hear 'Ned and Pons Opportunities' in everyday conversations!! :) :) Be sure to pop back in and correct the title from "an" to 'a'. :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Yvette, for giving me ?an? hand.
Comment from Miss Sherry
I am laughing so hard the cats are staring - what a fine befuddlement this is... Great humor and set out so you can tell who is speaking and so forth. All I can say is...more!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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I am laughing so hard the cats are staring - what a fine befuddlement this is... Great humor and set out so you can tell who is speaking and so forth. All I can say is...more!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you, OP. Ned is getting to be a hanfull..
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You can tame them!
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! I love it! These are the best characters anywhere. Pons is so patient with Ned. I would've put him in the hospital several times by now. This episode is especially good. Love how Pons went to get himself from the bathroom. LOL! You have a very weird brain, Bill, but that's a good thing. :)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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LOL! I love it! These are the best characters anywhere. Pons is so patient with Ned. I would've put him in the hospital several times by now. This episode is especially good. Love how Pons went to get himself from the bathroom. LOL! You have a very weird brain, Bill, but that's a good thing. :)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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If I were inviewing Ned I?d eat my tie.
