A Compilation of Short stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "Friday Evening "Expressions
18 total reviews
Comment from apky
Me again, Ulla, wading through my neglected reviews.
I can only wish you all the best with this contest and hope that my non-review review helps in getting you closer to the winning post!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
Me again, Ulla, wading through my neglected reviews.
I can only wish you all the best with this contest and hope that my non-review review helps in getting you closer to the winning post!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thanks a lot,Aki. Oh you can't imagine how behind I am. I think people are quite giving up on me. I don't blame them. I'm trying very hard catching up. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh My. Something much better than pizza at the door. =} This is well done, I saw no errors and can't suggest any improvement. It reads great to me. =} I hope you win the contest. Rox
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
Oh My. Something much better than pizza at the door. =} This is well done, I saw no errors and can't suggest any improvement. It reads great to me. =} I hope you win the contest. Rox
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much Roxanna. I'm so glad you liked this one. Warm regards.Ulla:)))
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Yeah, this sounds like a day in the life of many of us. You've even got down two of the popular choices when the empty fridge glares back at us. I like this little scenario that you've shared with us Ulla. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
Yeah, this sounds like a day in the life of many of us. You've even got down two of the popular choices when the empty fridge glares back at us. I like this little scenario that you've shared with us Ulla. Well done!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Hi Jeffrey, Thank you so much.I'm glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment from estory
This one had a nice little twist in it at the end; I guess that situation of being lazy about cooking ended up leading you to some handsome delivery guy. This started out as one thing, and ended up in a completely different place. I liked the descriptive language in the early part as set the scene. estory
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
This one had a nice little twist in it at the end; I guess that situation of being lazy about cooking ended up leading you to some handsome delivery guy. This started out as one thing, and ended up in a completely different place. I liked the descriptive language in the early part as set the scene. estory
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much, estory. I'm glad you liked it. I had great fun writing it. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment from robyn corum
hahahahaha!
Well, there's always next year, anyway. I mean, there's no need to rush into these resolutions, right?
hahahaha! Thanks for the smile! I enjoyed this one a lot!
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
hahahahaha!
Well, there's always next year, anyway. I mean, there's no need to rush into these resolutions, right?
hahahaha! Thanks for the smile! I enjoyed this one a lot!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thanks a lot, Robyn, and sorry for the late reply.Ulla:)))
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word flash fiction story, Friday Evening, falls into the word count limit and finds that the worst decisions can bring unforeseen benefits.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
This one-hundred-word flash fiction story, Friday Evening, falls into the word count limit and finds that the worst decisions can bring unforeseen benefits.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thanks alot, Bill. And sorry for the late reply. Ulla:))
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Interesting artwork, Ulla.
-I hope that didn't meet
her at the door!
-You develop your story well,
beginning with the background
of this person's day.
-She was all set to relax,
but realized she need to
get her act together!
-I guess fate had other ideas.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
-Interesting artwork, Ulla.
-I hope that didn't meet
her at the door!
-You develop your story well,
beginning with the background
of this person's day.
-She was all set to relax,
but realized she need to
get her act together!
-I guess fate had other ideas.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much, Pam. I'm so sorry for the late review. I'm so behind and trying to catching up. All best. Ulla:)))
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You are very welcome, Ulla. No problem about being late with the reply.
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Thanks!!
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You are welcome🙂
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Indeed that could change everything. LOL You write about a hum-drum boring life and the desire to change. Then a knock at the door, Hmmm, Is it a new love interest or just the Pizza delivery? HAHA. You are the only one who knows. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Nancy:)
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
Indeed that could change everything. LOL You write about a hum-drum boring life and the desire to change. Then a knock at the door, Hmmm, Is it a new love interest or just the Pizza delivery? HAHA. You are the only one who knows. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Nancy:)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much, Nancy. I'm still catching up so do forgive me for this late answer. All the best A hug. Ulla:)))
Comment from barbara.wilkey
LOL I love that story. No, one never knows who's behind the door. I really enjoyed reading this flash fiction story. You did a good job writing it. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
LOL I love that story. No, one never knows who's behind the door. I really enjoyed reading this flash fiction story. You did a good job writing it. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Barbara. I'm still so very behind. Catching up as best as I can. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment from Joy Graham
Hi Ulla,
Oh I hear you on trying to live healthier. I have good intentions, but pizza and burgers taste so good. Now that I'm down and out with his hip pain issue, I can't exercise and work off the weight. Once they figure out how to fix me, I can't wait to get out to walk my dogs again. That is the goal. We used to do two hour walks, and I miss that very much.
This is a good contest entry. Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
Hi Ulla,
Oh I hear you on trying to live healthier. I have good intentions, but pizza and burgers taste so good. Now that I'm down and out with his hip pain issue, I can't exercise and work off the weight. Once they figure out how to fix me, I can't wait to get out to walk my dogs again. That is the goal. We used to do two hour walks, and I miss that very much.
This is a good contest entry. Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Hi Joy. Thank you so much. I'm sorry about the late answer, but I'm still catching up. Ulla:)))