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Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Scene at a Nativity"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from Dean Kuch
Oh, good grief...poor Ned (Pons too!).
Ya know, Pons has far more understanding than any man or woman I've ever heard of, Bill.
The dude has the patience of a saint!
At least he attempts to explain whatever situation they're faced with. But when there is little to no solid matter between the ears it's kinda hard to get it to stick.
Now if you'll 'scuse me I gotta go find this here Native titty critter myself...
~Dean
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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Oh, good grief...poor Ned (Pons too!).
Ya know, Pons has far more understanding than any man or woman I've ever heard of, Bill.
The dude has the patience of a saint!
At least he attempts to explain whatever situation they're faced with. But when there is little to no solid matter between the ears it's kinda hard to get it to stick.
Now if you'll 'scuse me I gotta go find this here Native titty critter myself...
~Dean
Comment Written 26-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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Be careful, Dean. I hear there?s. Noroom at the inn.
Comment from royowen
I enjoyed this alternative look at the nativity, by these two bright and breezy pair in Pons and Ned, the wise and knowledgeable Ned trying to explain to a puzzled and dyslexic-minded friend Pons, giving his version of events, well done, an excellent script Bill, hilariously scribed, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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I enjoyed this alternative look at the nativity, by these two bright and breezy pair in Pons and Ned, the wise and knowledgeable Ned trying to explain to a puzzled and dyslexic-minded friend Pons, giving his version of events, well done, an excellent script Bill, hilariously scribed, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Roy
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Most welcome
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is such a clever lil' exchange, Bil! Just writing my review here as I have a few moments to myself, but I shared it with my family yesterday at the dinner table ( you know, those big holiday table discussions that can sometimes get tedious or touchy?!) and it helped curb some of the heaviness that had 'crept I'm and putt some smiles back on! :) Thank you for sharing your talents as 'smile writer' ! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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This is such a clever lil' exchange, Bil! Just writing my review here as I have a few moments to myself, but I shared it with my family yesterday at the dinner table ( you know, those big holiday table discussions that can sometimes get tedious or touchy?!) and it helped curb some of the heaviness that had 'crept I'm and putt some smiles back on! :) Thank you for sharing your talents as 'smile writer' ! :) Yvette
Comment Written 25-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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You humble me, Yvette. Happy Holidays.
Comment from nomi338
I swear, if Ned were any dumber he would not have enough brain power to be able to breathe in and out. Even with that being said, he is one of my favorite characters. He allows me to know that I am still alive because if I can laugh, that means I am still here and kicking.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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I swear, if Ned were any dumber he would not have enough brain power to be able to breathe in and out. Even with that being said, he is one of my favorite characters. He allows me to know that I am still alive because if I can laugh, that means I am still here and kicking.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Thanks, nomi.
Comment from Jraokmepala
This was actually really funny. You managed to incorporate something in the best possible way: you made fun of someone's understanding of it instead of the thing itself.
-Jr
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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This was actually really funny. You managed to incorporate something in the best possible way: you made fun of someone's understanding of it instead of the thing itself.
-Jr
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Thank you, jraokmepala, for the exceptional review.
Comment from judiverse
Poor Ned just doesn't get it! The concept of a live nativity scene is hard for his little brain. Pons makes his point about the significance of Jesus' death, but it's too much for Ned. Ned's comment about being glad we have Twitter because if someone's born people will know about it. Fun with the name Beth Leigh Hemm too. Very entertaining. judi
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Poor Ned just doesn't get it! The concept of a live nativity scene is hard for his little brain. Pons makes his point about the significance of Jesus' death, but it's too much for Ned. Ned's comment about being glad we have Twitter because if someone's born people will know about it. Fun with the name Beth Leigh Hemm too. Very entertaining. judi
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Judi. Ned is a pill for sure.
Comment from Earl Corp
This was almost like a redneck Abbot and Costello Christmas themed Who's on First. Your scripts are hilarious. Nice job. Merry Christmas to you and your family.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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This was almost like a redneck Abbot and Costello Christmas themed Who's on First. Your scripts are hilarious. Nice job. Merry Christmas to you and your family.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Lou Costello makes Ned seem like Einstein.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! You are so good at these stories, and I really enjoy listening in to Pons and Ned's chit chat, you have them off perfectly. It's wonderful how you change the meaning of a word. Loved it! Have a wonderful Christmas! :)) Sandra x
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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LOL! You are so good at these stories, and I really enjoy listening in to Pons and Ned's chit chat, you have them off perfectly. It's wonderful how you change the meaning of a word. Loved it! Have a wonderful Christmas! :)) Sandra x
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Thank you, Sandra
Comment from Axiom Gray
Hahaha! Oh, Ned. It's amazing he can dress himself in the morning. You really nail these characters. Pons has extraordinary patience for this imbecilic friend of his.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Hahaha! Oh, Ned. It's amazing he can dress himself in the morning. You really nail these characters. Pons has extraordinary patience for this imbecilic friend of his.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Thank you, Ax. I appreciate your giving this a look.
Comment from Miss Sherry
This sounds too real...so many people have no idea of the birth or death of our Savior. You put it in a real cute form, so maybe it will get to some folks who haven't a clue. I smiled all the way through and shook my head. This poem is a form of ministry - love it!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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This sounds too real...so many people have no idea of the birth or death of our Savior. You put it in a real cute form, so maybe it will get to some folks who haven't a clue. I smiled all the way through and shook my head. This poem is a form of ministry - love it!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Thanks, OP. That's a great complement. Merry Christmas.
