Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Bill, this is a clever write with wonderful and fun dialogue. You build your story with a bit of quirkiness.... names of deceased and singing the ..I Shot the Sherriff.. song. Good script writing.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018

Thanks, Sugarray

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

well well, the truth is out but he had his song playing and didn't hear what Pez said so it is still hush, hush. He killed the sheriff.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018

Pez knows things.

reply by country ranch writer on 17-Dec-2018

smiles

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Old Pez is a pretty cool guy. I think his word choices tell a pretty convincing story about whom he suspected and what he might have don in retaliation. As a former policeman, I pay strict attention to what people say about certain things and the force behind how they say certain things.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018

Pez traces to dark places.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You do create some of the funniest names, Bill. At least, none of your readers would be offended you used their names. I guess Pallas was behind this one, too. Isn't it dangerous for him to keep telling these stories?

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018

All fiction, lyenochka.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Another fun brother-to-brother encounter....:) You know, I don't know if you have brothers, but I have all boys and my husband is one of the three boys and if anyone were to document their verbal banter on any given day, they could write an entire book of these "one-sceners". :) :) You've done a great job portraying that interaction that is entertaining from the external point of view by 'keeping them in character' that you establish early one. :) Yvette

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018

Thanks, Yvette. Pons and Ned are my ?how dumb is he? team, where Pez and Pallas are shaping up to be the ?what else don?t I know? pair. Thanks for the positive review. Bill

Comment from damommy

Excellent

I love your script between such interesting characters, one of them intelligent and the other not so much. LOL. The things you come up with are always amusing, and I enjoy them a lot!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018

Thanks, da

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Hmm, definitely Pez who shot them all. Will we find out any more about these dead victims? Will we have any more to this story? It's really good. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018

Pez has been revealing a lot of things he did as a young man. There will be more, not necessarily related to this.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

I knew Pez did it. Shot the sheriff too. He has to be stopped. Pallas could be his next victim. He may not kill him, but he might steal his girlfriends... or kill them! Shudder. How can such a fiend be allowed to run loose?

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018

Thanks for reviewing this, Phyllis. Pez has got a a lot of dark items in his past. We?ll say that his brother Pallas is safe though.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hee-hee-hee.
I happen to like that song by Bob Marley and Eric Clapton, Bill.
Pez and Pallas just might have stumbled onto the next best missing persons' case since Jimmy Hoffa went missing in July of 1975.
Pallas: Wow! Maybe somebody shot HIM! He might still be here, buried somewhere.

Pez: Maybe under this rotting old porch. ... Yeah, right along with the rotting corpse of Bozona Betch and all the rest of those Sons of Betches.
Funny stuff as always, Bill.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018

Thanks, Dean. I?ve been giving Pez all kinds of hidden past secrets to deal with.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I chuckled all the way through and am still smiling now, what an excellent read, if I had a sixth star so, would you, very entertaining, I hope you may decide to continue with this, thanks for the chuckles****kahpot

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 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018

Thanks, kahoot. I?ll try a couple more.