Family Ties Volume two.
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "I'm Dreaming Of A White Christmas."Second book Of Series.
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Comment from misscookie
I* love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
You capture my attention fro from the start
I got so into it I was looking for the mouse.(Smile)
Than you for sharing.
Happy Holiday
Cookie
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I* love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
You capture my attention fro from the start
I got so into it I was looking for the mouse.(Smile)
Than you for sharing.
Happy Holiday
Cookie
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
Comment from Alyssa Reynoso-Morris
Cute poem to share with kids. I appreciate the rhyming and lyrical nature of the poem. I love the "Puffy white snow," line as it paints a distinct picture.
I am not sure if there is a better way to say "Can you see the white mouse?"
The poem is written in an old English tone and that last line sounds a bit colloquial. Overall, excellent poem - 5 stars :)
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Cute poem to share with kids. I appreciate the rhyming and lyrical nature of the poem. I love the "Puffy white snow," line as it paints a distinct picture.
I am not sure if there is a better way to say "Can you see the white mouse?"
The poem is written in an old English tone and that last line sounds a bit colloquial. Overall, excellent poem - 5 stars :)
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
Good job on your short and well written verse. I did see the house in the reflection from the snow. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful poem with us.
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Good job on your short and well written verse. I did see the house in the reflection from the snow. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful poem with us.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
