Comment from Mark D. R.

Exceptional

CD,

Just for current events you deserve praise for the billboard image and your spot on text. Thanks for

'crusty contrarian' is great alliteration as are the rhymes on lines 1.2,5 and 3,4 too.

I am trying to get encouragement (and inclusion in dictionaries) for my 'freightening' word. This describes what happens when a long freight train rumbles, at night, through our rural farmlands and frightens the animals (or people) at rest. Take a look at my:
"Night train whistles loudly (Haiku) for my attempt to introduce this proposed word.

Take care,
Mark

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018

I will most certainly check out your haiku, Mark. However, even without doing so, I can see that this is a word we most definitely need in our language :)

Thanks for the great comments, and the most generous rating.

Craig

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a great limerick, Craig. Good job on its style. Your lines flow smoothly with a lively beat. I really like the unusual rhymes, too. This reminds me of a US President who had his country of birth questioned. Good job nd thanks for sharing. Jan

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 Comment Written 03-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018

I'm glad it achieved its aim, Jan. Thanks for the great comments, they are appreciated, as always. Craig