Oh No....It is a UFO
There is a UFO in the Forest.16 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Love your cat story starring Gidldes! Cute and sweet. Odd things flying must be unnerving to a cat or dog. Animals are very sensitive. You may enjoy my latest post based on my cat, Catzilla Junior. All my best to you with your entry!
Sally
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Love your cat story starring Gidldes! Cute and sweet. Odd things flying must be unnerving to a cat or dog. Animals are very sensitive. You may enjoy my latest post based on my cat, Catzilla Junior. All my best to you with your entry!
Sally
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Kelly Hanna
This was a very imaginative write! A hummingbird and a chimp verses a cat named Giddles! This felt like a neat children's story! It read with a happy beat in my head and I enjoyed that. I liked the idea of a cat on a drone taking pictures too. All around a good job!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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This was a very imaginative write! A hummingbird and a chimp verses a cat named Giddles! This felt like a neat children's story! It read with a happy beat in my head and I enjoyed that. I liked the idea of a cat on a drone taking pictures too. All around a good job!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a cute story and a little unexpected too. I like the dialogue and think it fits well in this scenario. But, what I did not understand, is why a cat is attached to a drone? Good job for this club entry.
Melissa
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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This is a cute story and a little unexpected too. I like the dialogue and think it fits well in this scenario. But, what I did not understand, is why a cat is attached to a drone? Good job for this club entry.
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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A cat attached to a drone is just my crazy imagination at work. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Zue65
This animal story where animals talk and act like human beings are given a fresh and modern feel by the author. That's a fresh technique and made your story moire interesting. Thanks for sharing an excellent write.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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This animal story where animals talk and act like human beings are given a fresh and modern feel by the author. That's a fresh technique and made your story moire interesting. Thanks for sharing an excellent write.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Janilou
This is a cute tale. It feel as if it should be part of a longer story.
The ending kind of leaves the reader hanging as there is no definite conclusion.
Notes:
. You are too tiny, but I like you. We can make fun of (Gidldes." )
Giddles?
All the best
Jan
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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This is a cute tale. It feel as if it should be part of a longer story.
The ending kind of leaves the reader hanging as there is no definite conclusion.
Notes:
. You are too tiny, but I like you. We can make fun of (Gidldes." )
Giddles?
All the best
Jan
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Giddles is the name of the cat. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Elaine
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Yes, I understand that. :-) What I was pointing out was that the word was misspelled in that sentence.
Comment from jmshumate
This is very well written and a very cute bit of fantasy to read, I always like stuff where animals are the characters in the story. I liked the line " unidentified fluffy object" that was funny! Good work and thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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This is very well written and a very cute bit of fantasy to read, I always like stuff where animals are the characters in the story. I liked the line " unidentified fluffy object" that was funny! Good work and thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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I appreciate your positive comments and I am glad you enjoyed my story. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Earl Corp
This is a very unique story. I like when animals are portrayed as being able to talk and have human characteristics. I hope your club entry does well. Very nice job.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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This is a very unique story. I like when animals are portrayed as being able to talk and have human characteristics. I hope your club entry does well. Very nice job.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from damommy
They've made a pact to make fun of Giddles. What a naughty pair they are. Very cute dialogue between a chimp and a hummingbird. Chimps can actually sign. I teach beginner and intermediate sign language, but I've never taught any chimps. lol
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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They've made a pact to make fun of Giddles. What a naughty pair they are. Very cute dialogue between a chimp and a hummingbird. Chimps can actually sign. I teach beginner and intermediate sign language, but I've never taught any chimps. lol
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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That is wonderful you are able to sign. I was visiting the Lowery Zoo in Florida and a chimp there was speaking to me in sing language. I was embarrassed I didn't know sign language. Thanks for reading my story and giving positive comments. Elaine
Comment from Spitfire
Clever idea to strap a cat onto a drone in search of a chimp,who escaped from a sanctuary, Bet Giddies is also casing the landscape for mice or birds.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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Clever idea to strap a cat onto a drone in search of a chimp,who escaped from a sanctuary, Bet Giddies is also casing the landscape for mice or birds.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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I had a cat named Giddles and he would never chase mice. Only our female cat will capture mice. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, those tow have Giddles number for sure. Good job with your little story, mermaids. I enjoyed reading it. I like the dialogue between the hummer and the chimp. When the kitty shows up, that is a fun addition. In the end, it seems as though all is back to normal. I like the idea of the kitty admiring himself in the mirror and the hummer asking to come visit as there are lots of feeders out. Good job and thanks for shsring a fun piece. Jan
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Haha, those tow have Giddles number for sure. Good job with your little story, mermaids. I enjoyed reading it. I like the dialogue between the hummer and the chimp. When the kitty shows up, that is a fun addition. In the end, it seems as though all is back to normal. I like the idea of the kitty admiring himself in the mirror and the hummer asking to come visit as there are lots of feeders out. Good job and thanks for shsring a fun piece. Jan
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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I am honored by your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
