Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Good job, Craig, with this neat poem. I like how you compared the storm of nature to the storm inside a person's being. Good job with the rhymes and smooth flow. The picture is great, too. thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018

Thanks very much for the positive comments, Jan -- they're appreciated. Craig

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Hi Craig,

I love the symbolism of the storm for unrest. It is true, all storms eventually pass and the sun shines again. 'unweather' ... it's kind of a strange word. One would think it means no kind of weather at all. Thanks for teaching something new.

"Yet,flooding rain one day gives way to sun" ... I really like the optimism here. Very nice, Craig.

Cheers,
Connie

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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018

Thanks, Connie, for the lovely comments, and your continued support, which is very much appreciated :) Craig

Comment from Debbie Pope

Exceptional

What a wise, optimistic poem. "Ill winds" blow and matters looks bad with flooding rains, but the "rain one day gives way to sun," and the rain serves "thirsty streams." Someday, you say, dreamers will again " feel free to dream."
I was feeling down today. This poem made me smile.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018

Thanks so much, Debbie, for the wonderful comments, and the delightful rating. I think everyone, everywhere hopes the storm passes soon. I hope your day improves Three A.M. here, back to bed for me! :) Cheers, Craig

reply by Debbie Pope on 26-Nov-2018

So you got up just to read my review, huh? Now you can sleep in peace.
Just kidding of course. I get up, work til I get sleepy again, back to sleep then if I?m lucky.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Craig, This is a very well written poem that kind of tells the story of the weather these days. Very unpredictable patterns it seems. You used very good descriptive words and very awesome art work to go with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018

Thanks so much, Teri. I'm very grateful for your kind comments :) Craig

Comment from Sugarray77

Exceptional

Craig, this is utterly beautiful poetry. I feel its movement on so many levels and grasp the hope that here in America, the turbulence will soon end and we will again be a nation of sensible people. Thanks... the nod to the natural elements is outstanding and vividly apt.

all the best,

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018

Thanks so much for the delightful comments and the stellar rating, Melissa. I'm so glad you enjoyed. I meant to post this a few hours ago, but Fanstory was having some issues I think. Back to bed for me now lol

Cheers,
Craig