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Family Ties Volume two.

Viewing comments for Prologue "Nip Them At Their Bud."
Second book Of Series.

3 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level


Solid Foundations are what makes a house strong enough to stand even climate adversities ..same goes for our society ..to thrive it needs solid foundatations...

... people that have learnt that helping their neighbours will bring benefit to everyone.

Wars are started because people start wanting to be rich and powerful at any cost.

It's up to the parents to teach/guide their children in the right direction and the bible was written to help parents in this very important task.

Kids must be taught from an early age that values like: honesty, loyalty, love for our neighbour..are qualities that God cherish and will build a flourishing, life respecting society.

Like most of your poems , they are reminders of very important truths.



 Comment Written 11-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
    CIAO FRANCA: Thank you for your encouraging understanding review. As usual...you are appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Good
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Certainly a wonderful addition to a book that you have begun entitled "Family Ties Volume two" -- the bible is certainly a good referenence! :) Thank you for sharing with everyone! :)

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
    HELLO Y.M. ROGER: Thank you for reading and reviewing my work here. You are appreciated. God bless.Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Pantygynt
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This is hardly a piece of original work. It is more a straight quotation from Proverbs 22:6.

'Train up a child in the way he should go,
And when he is old he will not depart from it.'

I don't see how I can award this more than three stars and that is generous.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
    HELLO PANTYGYNT: Thank you for reading and reviewing my work here. You are appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69.