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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from nomi338
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Not even half of a Wallaby would I ever wanna be, because as anybody can plainly see. Half of a Wallaby is way too much of a Wallaby for me to ever be, totally happy with my self or anybody else, so I might just might as well, go ahead and shoot myself.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
    So you will not be a wallaby.
Comment from judiverse
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He might be more comfortable in a shirt that wasn't so tight. Excellent work with the limerick. Cute lispy words. Maybe the lisp is caused by the tight shirt. I'd hate to think what the lower half is like if it's worse than the half wallaby part. judi

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Judi
reply by judiverse on 17-Oct-2018
    You're welcome. judi
Comment from lyenochka
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And apparently the narrator had a lithp. Good little limerick for the almost kangaroo beastie. Or maybe he was part bunny? What's worse than a wallaby?

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from Earl Corp
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You should be on to another poem subject pretty quickly you've stayed with wallabies for a long time. Im ready for another Baker's Dozen installment.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


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    Back to the woods.
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi Bill. They look like kangaroos. Your photo is cute. They are midget kangaroos. I thee. Are they just a subspecies of kangaroos?

"There onceth was a fellow from Perth". Should it be wath?

Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Yeth
Comment from Cass Carlton
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I like limericks and this is a classic. A lithping wallaby is just the thing to get me going first thing in the morning. Even a second cup of coffee wouldn't do as much.
Although it would help to get the wheels turning. I haven't been writing much at all lately, just reviewing other people's work. Your little stories and short, shorts about animals are very intriguing. Well done cheers Cass

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Cass
Comment from Gloria ....
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Haaaaaaaaaa, this is hilarious, Bill. I love a Wallaby with a wispth and this little fellow can write a pretty darn good Limerick uthing it too.

Excellent and most inventive. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Gloria
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Cute one, Bill. ! Love that picture. You look so young!

I love limericks, and this is a good one. I once petted a wallaby at a petting zoo. Just hopping around uncaged. Could have bitten the kids... or kicked them. But he was docile. :)

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Phyllis
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Definitely one of the stranger ones in the collection...have to wonder if the guy was actually 'on the lamb'...lol! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Yvette