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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from nomi338
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Anyone standing around with nothing in their hands will be lucky if they do not land in the hands of the police as this suspicious activity. Could it be that perhaps the Koala bear is a pusha bear, with sagging pants and fancy underwear, selling illegal; Koala Nuts

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
    My euchalyps are sealed
Comment from judiverse
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Eucalyptusless is a clever word. Excellent rhyme. You get more mileage out of your one point and 27 member cents offerings than I do out of something that's fully promoted. I love the Aussie animals, though, and am glad to see them promoted. judi

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Judi
reply by judiverse on 11-Oct-2018
    You're welcome. judi
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your world is so full of nature, animals big and small and as you concentrate on these marsupials, I realise your knowledge of them is wide and also amusing, this write is no exception, I love the word 'eucalyptusless! He he he, you always make me smile Bill, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    I?m so glad, Dolly. Thanks for brightening MY day.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow -- a great write about the Australian marsupials AND you've invented your own word 'eucalyptusless' -- outstanding! :) :) So, I'm thinking you should copyright it and try and sell it to the Australian Board of Tourism...LOL! :) :) A fun smile for the evening, sir -- thank you for sharing! :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Thank you, Yvette. I?ve coined twenty or thirty cool words on this site. Could for a laugh if nothing else.
Comment from Tina Crute
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Awesome! Part two is just as funny and surprising with its uniqueness, as part 1 is! I can't wait for part three! I have the urge to write silly rhymes now. Great job and so cute!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Tina. Funny is fun, but you?ll only win contests here by writing about love, loss, God, or sunsets.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
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Silly poem that made me smile. I love koala bears and kangaroos so I am an easy mark. Not sure where you came up with eucalyptusless; that made me laugh. Hugh

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Love making up words. Thanks for reviewing, Hugh.
Comment from lyenochka
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Quite the tongue-twister! I would think it's impossible to say, "eucalyptus-less" five times fast. I guess that the koala preferred not to share with either type of marsupial?

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Koala are tight with that euk.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Well this is just a hoot, Bill.

Wally and Kenny have invented themselves a new word, that most definitely should be added to the lexicon.

I look forward to more of their thinking. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Gloria, for giving this a look. Maybe Wally and Kenny have more to do.
Comment from Earl Corp
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This is a pretty cute poem. You could actually be published as a children's author if you were so inclined. You're taking to poetry like a duck to water. Good job!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Earl
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That was such a fun write, Bill! I love all your animal poems, you have a great sense of humour when it comes to writing these poems about them. I like the 'Wally B' lol, and then you have Kenny Q Kangaroo, that is so cute! Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Sandra