Wilderness Redemption Road
A frontier adventure19 total reviews
Comment from kathleenspalding
I think this is an excellent blurb! I see nothing to correct. Perfect use of artwork. The only thing I could suggest (especially for FanStory) is to double space between paragraphs to keep it easy to read.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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I think this is an excellent blurb! I see nothing to correct. Perfect use of artwork. The only thing I could suggest (especially for FanStory) is to double space between paragraphs to keep it easy to read.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the 5 stars and the paragraph advice.
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You're welcome
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Oh, I actually like your tagline and your writing blurb. The format really stands out to me. I like the larger sized fonts to separate a portion of the wording. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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Oh, I actually like your tagline and your writing blurb. The format really stands out to me. I like the larger sized fonts to separate a portion of the wording. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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Thanks Cindy. I actually finished next to last, but I got enough reviews the piece now has recognized status. Thank you for your review and taking time to read it
Comment from WildWithWords
First effort or not, you've done a bang-up job on this one, Earl (a good thing in case you wondered).
The quote at the start ROCKS. Increased font size was a great move, the picture used is perfect for the story line and the spiel is great.
Very well done, dude!
Bill (WildWithWords)
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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First effort or not, you've done a bang-up job on this one, Earl (a good thing in case you wondered).
The quote at the start ROCKS. Increased font size was a great move, the picture used is perfect for the story line and the spiel is great.
Very well done, dude!
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 17-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018
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Wow Bill I appreciate all the good comments. I couldn't get my hat on this morning. I'm starting the real book today.
Comment from poetwatch
Good start for a continuing story. You grabbed the reader's attention and it's high time you finish the story. I want to read it. I'm a western fanatic, a poet and a wanna-be writer. Thank you for sharing this jem.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Good start for a continuing story. You grabbed the reader's attention and it's high time you finish the story. I want to read it. I'm a western fanatic, a poet and a wanna-be writer. Thank you for sharing this jem.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Thanks for the great rating. Good to find another western fan. I started this just for the contest but the response has been so well received It is going to be my next project.
Comment from humpwhistle
Doo is a character I like--so is the period and the territory.
You've set up the characters and the various conflicts.
I might name a particular Shawnee war chief, indicating a particular grudge (and another subplot).
Fenimore Cooper and Kenneth Roberts are the only two authors I know of who have done justice to frontier action east of the Mississippi.
Good luck with your entry.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Doo is a character I like--so is the period and the territory.
You've set up the characters and the various conflicts.
I might name a particular Shawnee war chief, indicating a particular grudge (and another subplot).
Fenimore Cooper and Kenneth Roberts are the only two authors I know of who have done justice to frontier action east of the Mississippi.
Good luck with your entry.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 17-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your rating. I hope to do justice to the action, but it won't be anywhere near JFC or Kenneth Roberts. Great minds think alike, I was already thinking of a Shawnee chief to pug in. Thanks again!
Comment from Artasylum
Excellent work... I was Grab Me, Thrill Me, Make Me Read...You did a great job on this piece... I love it from start to finish and can't wait to find out if it's lose or gain... yours, diana
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Excellent work... I was Grab Me, Thrill Me, Make Me Read...You did a great job on this piece... I love it from start to finish and can't wait to find out if it's lose or gain... yours, diana
Comment Written 17-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
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Thank-you very much for the 6 star rating! That made my day, not only that You're the 15th review on the piece. Diana you know there's always some lose AND gain in life and Wilderness Redemption Road will be no different. Thanks again for taking time to read it and stay tuned, more to come!
Comment from poesyapprentice
Hmmm, the use of the word dude in a frontier story threw me. I like this genre so I'd probably read it. The tag line was very interesting, and definitely caught my attention more than the others I have read thus far. The first paragraph read better for me than the last, but your ending line was good. "On one..." was where it started getting so-so in the last paragraph. Maybe I'd break that last half up into more stand-alone sentences. Not bad for a first try. I doubt I could have done better. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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Hmmm, the use of the word dude in a frontier story threw me. I like this genre so I'd probably read it. The tag line was very interesting, and definitely caught my attention more than the others I have read thus far. The first paragraph read better for me than the last, but your ending line was good. "On one..." was where it started getting so-so in the last paragraph. Maybe I'd break that last half up into more stand-alone sentences. Not bad for a first try. I doubt I could have done better. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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Thanks for reading and the 5 stars.
Comment from Nanny 6
Very down to earth and an attention getter, I would read it just to see what happens with the jealous women involved in the story, and how Doo Carter handles the situation, along with all the other problems he's being faced with. Good luck in the contest.
Judy
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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Very down to earth and an attention getter, I would read it just to see what happens with the jealous women involved in the story, and how Doo Carter handles the situation, along with all the other problems he's being faced with. Good luck in the contest.
Judy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
I find the blurb to be quite revealing about the main character. The description should interest readers drawn to this type of wilderness hero into reading the book. The aspect of a love interest might bring in romance enthusiasts as well.
The tag line might work on the right reader.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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I find the blurb to be quite revealing about the main character. The description should interest readers drawn to this type of wilderness hero into reading the book. The aspect of a love interest might bring in romance enthusiasts as well.
The tag line might work on the right reader.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from misscookie
I'm not good on judging anyone's work , cause I;'m always making a mess of my write
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i know you captured my attention from the first word to the last
Thank t you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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I'm not good on judging anyone's work , cause I;'m always making a mess of my write
All
i know you captured my attention from the first word to the last
Thank t you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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Thank you
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Your very welcome, it was my pleasure
Until next time
Cookie
